Positive Feedback! Oh, joy!

[BohemianEcstacy]

Yay! I just got two positive comments on my first erotica story! Woo hoo! I feel simultaneously inappropriate and awesome. One said "awesome", and the other was like "this is pretty good, for a girl from Minnesota." Hahaha! Yay.

Hehe, just had to share my joy. If you're curious about the story in question, feel free to check it out (I'm not soliciting my work, here, I'm just giving the option...)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=137561

I'm the queen of the world, man. Just had to share.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Yay! I just got two positive comments on my first erotica story! Woo hoo! I feel simultaneously inappropriate and awesome. One said "awesome", and the other was like "this is pretty good, for a girl from Minnesota." Hahaha! Yay.

Hehe, just had to share my joy. If you're curious about the story in question, feel free to check it out (I'm not soliciting my work, here, I'm just giving the option...)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=137561

I'm the queen of the world, man. Just had to share.

Savor the moment, oh girl from the north country. Believe it or not, some of us have gotten tons of positive feedback. Of course, it's usually couched in phrases such as: "This is positively the worse crap I've ever read," or maybe, "No one at Lit is any better at insulting readers and the English language."

Congratulations.

Rumple Foreskin

 

[BohemianEcstasy]

Oh, yeah, I know. I'm sure if someone who knows what s/he is TALKING about comments on the story, it will be somewhat more informative and somewhat less flattering. *sigh* Oh, well, that's a first effort, for you. And I'm flattered that you took the time to read the post, Foreskin--you're practically a legend here.

*casts her eyes down in light of Your Excellency.* Heehee.

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

And I'm flattered that you took the time to read the post, Foreskin--you're practically a legend here.

Only in my own mind. And as many of the folks around here will be quick to point out, some minds wouldn't be so terrible to lose.

RF

 

[cloudy]

Yay! I just got two positive comments on my first erotica story! Woo hoo! I feel simultaneously inappropriate and awesome. One said "awesome", and the other was like "this is pretty good, for a girl from Minnesota." Hahaha! Yay.

Hehe, just had to share my joy. If you're curious about the story in question, feel free to check it out (I'm not soliciting my work, here, I'm just giving the option...)

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=137561

I'm the queen of the world, man. Just had to share.

Congratulations! I know exactly how you feel.....just had my second story approved today, and already had one very nice comment from someone about it. Makes you feel like you're walking on air, doesn't it?

Congrats again!

 

[dr_mabeuse]

You've got a lot to be proud of. That's a very good little story, direst and to the point, and for a first-timer I'd say it's excellent. Very well done, very natural and easy prose, a lot of hot little detail. It's rare to find a new writer who can describe what was done while relating her thoughts and feelings at the same time, but you did so admirably.

Welcome to Lit, and I look forward to more.

---dr.M.

 

[rgraham666]

Only in my own mind. And as many of the folks around here will be quick to point out, some minds wouldn't be so terrible to lose.

RF

No need to worry about losing your mind Rumple. It's so sick, it can't get very far.

Ba dump ksssh!

Oh dear. Where are my manners?

I read your story. Well done. I'll amend that. It was quite hot.

 

[herecomestherain]

BohemianEcstacy, congratulations, a hot first story...ooohh I love it when he speaks Spanish....be still my heart! And now I'll reveal the true extent of my shallowness...a man in black Wranglers, swoon

Seriously though, it's great to get feedback, nice to know your writing is enjoyed. I love the feedback where a reader reads more into your characters than even you as the writer did!

 

[BohemianEcstasy]

You guys are so awesome. *night is officially made*

Looking at it, I have found my points of improvement, points for next time. But there will be a next time, I think, which is fun. *nods*

Once again, thank you so much for the feedback--bonus that it's positive, but thanks in general.

BohemianEcstasy