Pondering the indelible...

[The_Fool]

Her lover, who lives in the drawer,
Never hurts her psyche,
Always knows what she wants.
Is always ready, always senses her mood.
Wants her, as much as she needs.
Will stop,
Linger,
Then move and move and move
Until she is lost,
Forgetting he is not real.
She whispers sweet words of lust and passion
until, in tears, she lets go.
Then realizes, her passion is her's alone.




Heartfelt, but inspired by The Fool

Welcome....

 

[The_Fool]

Oh, I like

Told ya so.....

 

[The_Fool]

Hold that thought post

sighs. I've got plenty of sighs. Its smiles that are in short supply.
Tears I have as well. It's laughter I would love to get a hold of.

 

[Guest]

sighs. I've got plenty of sighs. Its smiles that are in short supply.
Tears I have as well. It's laughter I would love to get a hold of.

(You need a break from your job, don't you?)

 

[The_Fool]

(You need a break from your job, don't you?)

I do, but this is not related. Just a random thought. Okay not so random, but not as bad as it sounds...

 

[Guest]

I do, but this is not related. Just a random thought. Okay not so random, but not as bad as it sounds...

Let's go get some Mexican food again.

I'll giggle if you want.

 

[The_Fool]

Let's go get some Mexican food again.

I'll giggle if you want.

I'm thinking more of a throaty sensual laugh...

 

[Guest]

I'm thinking more of a throaty sensual laugh...

I should be blushing.

 

[The_Fool]

offered with restraint

Coming together - Pondering

 

[The_Fool]

brain fart:



Respond with Restraint

 

[Divulgence]

*****

 

[The_Fool]

This is incredible work.

Thank you.....

 

[Divulgence]

*****

 

[The_Fool]

You are very welcome.

The mix of submission and control with the complicated rhyming scheme - I'm hooked.

The poetry type is called a Villanelle. I usually write them in iambic pentameter cuz that is how I learned them...

It was a fun write...

 

[Guest]

The poetry type is called a Villanelle. I usually write them in iambic pentameter cuz that is how I learned them...

It was a fun write...

Evening, Fool!

Hey - That's a Villanelle?

You mentioned that before. It's a French Horn solo, too.

Interesting.

 

[The_Fool]

Evening, Fool!

Hey - That's a Villanelle?

You mentioned that before. It's a French Horn solo, too.

Interesting.

Yep...that's it. Easy in some ways to write. Pain in the ass in other ways. You use the same words but you have to change the shade of the meaning. Sometimes I do alright, other times I suck at that.

 

[Guest]

Yep...that's it. Easy in some ways to write. Pain in the ass in other ways. You use the same words but you have to change the shade of the meaning. Sometimes I do alright, other times I suck at that.

Well, that works for me, too.

Sometimes I do alright, sometimes I really suck well.

 

[The_Fool]

Well, that works for me, too.

Sometimes I do alright, sometimes I really suck well.

you are on a roll......

And I am rolling to bed....goodnight.

 

[Guest]

you are on a roll......

And I am rolling to bed....goodnight.

Goodnight, dear Fool.

I'm editing and drinking. I'll be up for awhile.

Sleep well.



(Looking forward to seeing you sometime again!)

 

[The_Fool]

five of these submitted to clean sheets. we will see what happens.

they may have opened a can of worms.....

 

[impressive]

they may have opened a can of worms.....

I dislike editing you out of my posts, but I'll just bookmark it again elsewhere.

 

[The_Fool]

Coming together - Pondering

 

[Guest]

I'm glad you clarified, Fool.



Terrific as always.

How many more poems have been accepted for publication?

 

[Belegon]

Damn good one, Fool!

 

[The_Fool]

I'm glad you clarified, Fool.



Terrific as always.

How many more poems have been accepted for publication?

Just the two were accepted so far for one publication.