Pondering the indelible...

PMI said:
Her lover, who lives in the drawer,
Never hurts her psyche,
Always knows what she wants.
Is always ready, always senses her mood.
Wants her, as much as she needs.
Will stop,
Linger,
Then move and move and move
Until she is lost,
Forgetting he is not real.
She whispers sweet words of lust and passion
until, in tears, she lets go.
Then realizes, her passion is her's alone.




Heartfelt, but inspired by The Fool


Welcome.... :rose:
 
Hold that thought post

sighs. I've got plenty of sighs. Its smiles that are in short supply.
Tears I have as well. It's laughter I would love to get a hold of.
 
The_Fool said:
sighs. I've got plenty of sighs. Its smiles that are in short supply.
Tears I have as well. It's laughter I would love to get a hold of.

:rose:

(You need a break from your job, don't you?)
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
:rose:

(You need a break from your job, don't you?)


I do, but this is not related. Just a random thought. Okay not so random, but not as bad as it sounds... :rose:
 
The_Fool said:
I do, but this is not related. Just a random thought. Okay not so random, but not as bad as it sounds... :rose:

Let's go get some Mexican food again.

I'll giggle if you want.

:rose:
 
offered with restraint

Coming together - Pondering
 
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Divulgence said:
You are very welcome.

The mix of submission and control with the complicated rhyming scheme - I'm hooked.

:rose:


The poetry type is called a Villanelle. I usually write them in iambic pentameter cuz that is how I learned them...

It was a fun write... :D
 
The_Fool said:
The poetry type is called a Villanelle. I usually write them in iambic pentameter cuz that is how I learned them...

It was a fun write... :D

Evening, Fool!

Hey - That's a Villanelle?

You mentioned that before. It's a French Horn solo, too.

Interesting.

:cathappy:
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
Evening, Fool!

Hey - That's a Villanelle?

You mentioned that before. It's a French Horn solo, too.

Interesting.

:cathappy:



Yep...that's it. Easy in some ways to write. Pain in the ass in other ways. You use the same words but you have to change the shade of the meaning. Sometimes I do alright, other times I suck at that.
 
The_Fool said:
Yep...that's it. Easy in some ways to write. Pain in the ass in other ways. You use the same words but you have to change the shade of the meaning. Sometimes I do alright, other times I suck at that.


Well, that works for me, too.

Sometimes I do alright, sometimes I really suck well.

:cathappy:
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
Well, that works for me, too.

Sometimes I do alright, sometimes I really suck well.

:cathappy:



:D you are on a roll...... :kiss:

And I am rolling to bed....goodnight.
 
The_Fool said:
:D you are on a roll...... :kiss:

And I am rolling to bed....goodnight.

Goodnight, dear Fool.

I'm editing and drinking. I'll be up for awhile.

Sleep well.

:rose:

(Looking forward to seeing you sometime again!)
 
I'm glad you clarified, Fool.

:rose:

Terrific as always.

How many more poems have been accepted for publication?
 
sweetsubsarahh said:
I'm glad you clarified, Fool.

:rose:

Terrific as always.

How many more poems have been accepted for publication?


Just the two were accepted so far for one publication.
 
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