Police station kidnapping

[mgano4]

I have idea about all famele police station captured by white slavers the poor policewomen are forced on the ground bound gagged and hogtied them raped and taked to slavery. The story could take place in england, Australia, Canada, nederland USA Austria.
The policewomen should be blond dresed in uniform with trausers and very pretty. what do you think?

 

[sirhugs]

Likely too rapey for Literotica.

 

[CuttingEdge]

There are about 500,000 stories on literotica so it's hard to remember one particular story by title alone.

That being said, there are no rape stories on literotica, but there are non-consent stories. In that, there is a HUGE difference. Knowing the difference is really what makes or breaks a submission on litertotica.

I wrote a non-consent story on here, and this is the difference. It was about a wealthy woman stood up by a wealthy boyfriend as she sits in a posh restaurant. As she goes outside incensed, a homeless man asks her for money. Mad, she absolutely berates him, but when asks for food to eat, she decides to play his game. At one of many condos she owns, she makes him dinner, and then... her just takes her.

Now this is the difference between non-consent and rape stories: while she did not give consent, during sex she realizes what real passionate sex is, and what being a token trophy girlfriend is. Despite everything being wrong about the homeless man, she realizes everything about him is also right. Ultimately, she realizes that a having money is not what makes for the right man, nor what makes for great sex. In my story, it ends with her going back the next week to find the homeless man for more sex, and leads the reader to believe a relationship between the two has started.

In your story idea, it lacks that. Its just about a police station of ladies who are forced to have sex. That is not only NOT non-consent, but also is kind of creepy. To that end, simply stating, "afterwards she really enjoyed the sex" is not going to work either. Its really about character arc, or where a character slowly changes throughout the story to end 180 degrees opposed from where they started. Along the way though, there MUST be non-verbalized cues that key the person into knowing that the person wants sex, or that it really is good for them to have sex for other reasons.

In short, non-consent is where sex is really good for the person who might not have given their permission verbally. A rape story is where the person initializing the sex gets all the enjoyment.

 

[sirhugs]

There are about 500,000 stories on literotica so it's hard to remember one particular story by title alone.

That being said, there are no rape stories on literotica, but there are non-consent stories. In that, there is a HUGE difference. Knowing the difference is really what makes or breaks a submission on litertotica.

I wrote a non-consent story on here, and this is the difference. It was about a wealthy woman stood up by a wealthy boyfriend as she sits in a posh restaurant. As she goes outside incensed, a homeless man asks her for money. Mad, she absolutely berates him, but when asks for food to eat, she decides to play his game. At one of many condos she owns, she makes him dinner, and then... her just takes her.

Now this is the difference between non-consent and rape stories: while she did not give consent, during sex she realizes what real passionate sex is, and what being a token trophy girlfriend is. Despite everything being wrong about the homeless man, she realizes everything about him is also right. Ultimately, she realizes that a having money is not what makes for the right man, nor what makes for great sex. In my story, it ends with her going back the next week to find the homeless man for more sex, and leads the reader to believe a relationship between the two has started.

In your story idea, it lacks that. Its just about a police station of ladies who are forced to have sex. That is not only NOT non-consent, but also is kind of creepy. To that end, simply stating, "afterwards she really enjoyed the sex" is not going to work either. Its really about character arc, or where a character slowly changes throughout the story to end 180 degrees opposed from where they started. Along the way though, there MUST be non-verbalized cues that key the person into knowing that the person wants sex, or that it really is good for them to have sex for other reasons.

In short, non-consent is where sex is really good for the person who might not have given their permission verbally. A rape story is where the person initializing the sex gets all the enjoyment.

thank you for taking care of this.
I will however point out that it is only marginally a Story Ideas discussion. These discussions typical infest the Author's Hangout, which is the forum for broad discussions of writing.
If you vsit there, stop by tx's coffee shop & say I sent you. That is likely me sleeping at the insomniac's table.

 

[lovecraft68]

Yes but I've read stories about kidnapping and rape around here so what's the proble? I also search for the story about british arotcratic family kidnapped into harem as a revenge for thair crimes. I think the story called "Family secrets". Do you remember it?

I agree with Sir Hugs that by what Lit claims they have for rules, the idea is too much

But thank you for stating this material is everywhere on this site proving they really don't care about their rules.
Having said that, I'm not a fan of flat out non con and your idea makes me cringe, and material like this shouldn't be anywhere but in your own head.

Too bad that as previously mentioned the site doesn't agree enough to have an actual screening process.