Poker night where everyone wins

[Blondie01]

Was looking for feedback on my story

 

[alohadave]

Link to it so people don't need to look for it.

 

[lovecraft68]

Link to the OP's story

https://www.literotica.com/s/poker-night-where-everyone-wins

 

[Blondie01]

Link to the OP's story

https://www.literotica.com/s/poker-night-where-everyone-wins

Thanks

 

[dirk2024]

No tags?

"Story does not have any tags"

 

[Blondie01]

Trying to figure out how to add them???

 

[lovecraft68]

Trying to figure out how to add them???

When you submit your story there is a space for you to enter what ever tag you want. Type on in, hit enter then type the next

 

[lovecraft68]

No tags?

"Story does not have any tags"

So you can't read a short one page story because it has no tags?

 

[lovecraft68]

This was a quick and easy read. It's what I would refer to as 'classic smut" a basic and common set up, low on story, but high on action. I'm the type to judge a story by what it's intended to be. What I mean by that is I'm not the type of critic to hold every story to some type of high standard based on the 'best stories ever'

This piece was short and to the point and meant to simply be a fun stroker and in that regard it delivered exactly that.

Pretty good for a first effort.

 

[dirk2024]

So you can't read a short one page story because it has no tags?

I can...and I did read it. I was just pointing it out as tags make a story more searchable for other readers.

 

[lovecraft68]

I can...and I did read it. I was just pointing it out as tags make a story more searchable for other readers.

Hopefully they see the screenshot I posted. I only asked because sometimes people here aren't saying it as advice but being king of pretentious. Glad you gave it a read for them.

 

[Blondie01]

This was a quick and easy read. It's what I would refer to as 'classic smut" a basic and common set up, low on story, but high on action. I'm the type to judge a story by what it's intended to be. What I mean by that is I'm not the type of critic to hold every story to some type of high standard based on the 'best stories ever'

This piece was short and to the point and meant to simply be a fun stroker and in that regard it delivered exactly that.

Pretty good for a first effort.

Thanks. Was something that happened years ago. That's how i remembered it. Maybe try my new on Company Xmas party fun

 

[Rj_Gallos]

Fantastic story post!
Thanks for sharing and looking forward to reading more of your experiences!

 

[Blondie01]

Have you read both stories?

 

[Rj_Gallos]

Yes, another fantastic post!
A good read to tiers to go check out his work!