poetry

[skitz21]

Shadows of a whisper
silence of the lonely night
screams that are never heard
shutup! hush! queit!

Terror, tension, and tragedy
lost inside a nightmare
Is it consequence or is it coincidence

Death and deception
lurking before my eyes
can we ever be sure
where the truth really lies

 

[WickedEve]

Shadows of a whisper
silence of the lonely night
screams that are never heard
shutup! hush! queit!

Terror, tension, and tragedy
lost inside a nightmare
Is it consequence or is it coincidence

Death and deception
lurking before my eyes
can we ever be sure
where the truth really lies

I like the poem, skitz21. Since you posted on the poetry feedback and discussion forum, I'm assuming you're searching for feedback. Here are a few very minor edits/suggestions:

Shadows of a whisper
silence of lonely night
screams never heard
hush! quiet!

Terror, tension, tragedy
lost inside a nightmare
Is it consequence, coincidence?

Death and deception
lurk before my eyes
can we ever be sure
where truth really lies

Welcome to the board! I hope you'll post more.