paganangel
born wrong
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thanx 4 a greayt idea dcl. i'm frustrated about not getting feedback on my stuff. i'll publish here and so can anyone else!!! then we can rip on each other. here's my first:
A Day Late and a Dollar Shy
by paganangel ©
Well, you are gone
And why it only hits me sometimes
I can only guess
I thought this new war distracted me
Yet had it not
I know I’d have found something to
Who wants to think of whom
When they are gone
I hate people and they hate me
Judgmental and outspoken
But not with you
With you I held silent
You were to be trusted
Admired
And through my silence
Always a story to tell
Rescuing a girl from an Albanian mobster
And then stealing from him
Strippers from New Orleans
Movie stars’ sisters
Good times
And now it’s nothing
Memories…silent
One too many hits of GHB
Wrong place at the wrong time
Random tragedy
And I can’t even say I told you so
In memory of Damien Kilpert 1974-2001
click here for more...and for heaven's sake....VOTE!!!!
A Day Late and a Dollar Shy
by paganangel ©
Well, you are gone
And why it only hits me sometimes
I can only guess
I thought this new war distracted me
Yet had it not
I know I’d have found something to
Who wants to think of whom
When they are gone
I hate people and they hate me
Judgmental and outspoken
But not with you
With you I held silent
You were to be trusted
Admired
And through my silence
Always a story to tell
Rescuing a girl from an Albanian mobster
And then stealing from him
Strippers from New Orleans
Movie stars’ sisters
Good times
And now it’s nothing
Memories…silent
One too many hits of GHB
Wrong place at the wrong time
Random tragedy
And I can’t even say I told you so
In memory of Damien Kilpert 1974-2001
click here for more...and for heaven's sake....VOTE!!!!
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