Poem feedback

[Charlus]

I wrote a poem about the War called "20 Marines to the gallon."

I'd like to hear your feedback.

You can read the poem here:

http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=86723

Thanks

Charlus

 

[*Catbabe*]

Hi,
The poetry feedback board is listed right below story feedback. I bet you would get a better response if you posted your link there.

Cat

 

[Charlus]

Reply

Thanks for the info