plot needed

[coleman]

HI, i am thinking of writing a story about a young wife, mid 20's, who ends up sleeping with her father in law. I was hoping someone could help me with the plot.

This is what i have so far:
Husband and wife are recently married.
The couple go to stay with the husbands mother and father for a short holiday.
Wife is very attractive and innocent, ie not a slut.
Father in law is the compleat opposite-filthy, over weight, drunk and all ways has dirty thoughts about his daughter in law.

As u can see i don't have a lot for the core of the story, so please help me out.
i was hoping the father in law slowly tricks the wife into bed, eg-fakes illness

 

[Tatewaki]

HI, i am thinking of writing a story about a young wife, mid 20's, who ends up sleeping with her father in law. I was hoping someone could help me with the plot.

This is what i have so far:
Husband and wife are recently married.
The couple go to stay with the husbands mother and father for a short holiday.
Wife is very attractive and innocent, ie not a slut.
Father in law is the compleat opposite-filthy, over weight, drunk and all ways has dirty thoughts about his daughter in law.

As u can see i don't have a lot for the core of the story, so please help me out.
i was hoping the father in law slowly tricks the wife into bed, eg-fakes illness

Hello Coleman!

I often find it best to start from the end and work backwards. How do you want your story to end? Once you know that, work back from that point and add critical elements to the emerging plot.

The most important thing you can ask yourself is "why?" For every decision that you make about your plot and that your characters make about their lives, you must ask yourself why they chose this action. Even if the action is forced upon them, you must know clearly in your head why they allowed it to happen. People always have choice. Their choices may be drastic or rather one-sided, but it is still a choice. Even the classic extortion or blackmail plots involve choice; the victimized heroine can decide to let her baby daughter perish, or permit all those pictures of her screwing her college professor hit the Internet.

For this technique to work, you must know your characters well. You must know what they would do in each circumstance. Their actions and reactions to external stimulus will comprise the plot in your story.

Give it a shot, and let me know how you do.

Cheers!

-T

 

[coleman]

i was hoping that in the end, the daughter in law becomes her father in law's sex slave, and ends up doing things she never thougth she would do.
But the problem is that i need some idears on how the father in law gets into his daughter in law's panties.
Any possible senarios????

 

[Tatewaki]

i was hoping that in the end, the daughter in law becomes her father in law's sex slave, and ends up doing things she never thougth she would do.
But the problem is that i need some idears on how the father in law gets into his daughter in law's panties.
Any possible senarios????

I have hundreds, but will they fit into your character personas? I don't know.

Think about your two key characters (Daughter In Law and Father in Law) and their strengths/weaknesses. Remember, people find humiliating the things that they hold dearest. These things are what can be used against them. Think about those things wrt the DIL, and make the FIL expose/exploit them ruthlessly. Don't neglect his character, either. Give him a real hate-on for his son or his circumstances. Give him a reason to sexually desire his DIL and to violate his son's trust.

Think character and character interaction. Scenes will form naturally from that.

Good luck!

-T

 

[sirhugs]

one possibilty:

FIL is an internet porn dog. DIl accidentally stumbles across it. Being innocent, she is shocked, but then aroused. FIL eventually finds out , exploits her. Its been done (to death?) in many variations already, so you'd need to build details and twists to maske it fresh.

 

[Chicklet]

start to finish, finish to start

that's how they tell us to do it in screen writing. what do you want the end to be? okay, how did they get there?

 

[coleman]

i need some more idear's on how the FIL can get his DIL because i am still stuck.
some of the idears posted here have helped me creat the characters, all i need is some help in bringing them together.

 

[Tatewaki]

i need some more idear's on how the FIL can get his DIL because i am still stuck.
some of the idears posted here have helped me creat the characters, all i need is some help in bringing them together.

Coleman;

Why not put down what ideas you have, and we'll add to it? Writing is hard work; you have to put forth some effort if you want to finish a good story.

Are you looking for assistance, or someone to write it for you? I'm happy to do the former.

-T

 

[Chicklet]

Why not put down what ideas you have, and we'll add to it? Writing is hard work; you have to put forth some effort if you want to finish a good story.

this'd be cool - i'd love to help add to a character = )

 

[sirhugs]

Coleman:

read a few FIL/DIl stories on Lit, see how they work. See which you like, what fits your idea. Bring options here.

 

[BlackSnake]

Coleman,

I was thinking about the FIL. Say he's hidden in riches and his son is desperate to get it. By dealth or other means under handed. The DIL has the same a genda, but with different tactics. Her weapon is her sexy bod.

The FIL is not stupid. He knows to watch his back around his son, and figures out the DIL's game as well. He tests her to see just how far she is willing to go to get what she want.

The FIL have her to do everything imaginable sexually for him and humilating things in public, and then have her to divorce his son. Having her to divorce his son is for the son's own good, eventhough the son doesn't deserve being looked out for.

The son and FIL reconcile.

 

[coleman]

Hey Tatewaki,
i would love for you to write my story.
Some possible idears are-
the FIL is a dirty old man who loves to fuck, but his wife will not do it with him anymore. so he usally goes out and sleeps with pros to please himself. His newly married son and DIL come over to stay with them for a holiday.
The FIL instantly desires his DIL, but she is too innocent and faithful to her husband. So the FIL starts to spy on her around the house. From here on its up to u on how you want it to go, but have the FIL go after the DIL, not the other way around.
Mabey the husband is forced to go back to work and the FIL gets his chance.
Please write this for me.

 

[Tatewaki]

Hey Tatewaki,
i would love for you to write my story.
Some possible idears are-
the FIL is a dirty old man who loves to fuck, but his wife will not do it with him anymore. so he usally goes out and sleeps with pros to please himself. His newly married son and DIL come over to stay with them for a holiday.
The FIL instantly desires his DIL, but she is too innocent and faithful to her husband. So the FIL starts to spy on her around the house. From here on its up to u on how you want it to go, but have the FIL go after the DIL, not the other way around.
Mabey the husband is forced to go back to work and the FIL gets his chance.
Please write this for me.

I think you misunderstood, Coleman. The quote was "Are you looking for assistance, or someone to write it for you?

=> I'm happy to do the former. <="

-T

 

[Guest]

.... Father in law is the compleat opposite-filthy, over weight, drunk and all ways has dirty thoughts about his daughter in law ...

Anyone writing stories about me will receive harassing mail from my lawyers. Anyone with half an eye can see you are writing about me!



Edited to correct error pointed out by SirHugs. profound apologies.

 

[sirhugs]

Re:renundancy alert

Anyone writing stories about me will receive harrassing mail from my lawyers. Anyone with half an eye can see you are writing about me!

do lawyers send anything besides harassing mail?