Please write a story for me about a landlord's daughter.

[MightyZor]

Ok, please I beg you write me a short story where a young guy is pissed off with his landlord, but he is friendly with either his landlord's wife or landlord's sexy daughter. Then the young guy gets to have either one.

 

[pop_54]

Hmmmmmm!!!!

Why not have him begin an affair with both the landlords wife and daughter, threesomes while the landlord is out collecting rent from other properties.

Maybe even work in an orgy, the wife and daughter turn out to be so pissed with the landlord and his tight behaviour they agree to be gang banged by this young guy's friends as well.

pops..........

 

[MightyZor]

I really like what you suggest. Heres another twist. Maybe the landlord's wife is his daughters step mom so both of them have something of a grudge on him, so they decide to do this kind of psychological revenge. So? is anyone gonna write it for me? It kinda sucks writing a store about your own fantasy, so I need your help

 

[sirhugs]

Zor:

most of my stories grow out of my own fantasies. Go ahead and try writing it. I f you need help, pm one of us.

 

[cjunkie]

brilliant ideas. I really dig the threesome

 

[HottieRebecca]

i like the idea alot, almost enough to take it and start writing, but i've never been good at coming up with titles, does anyone have a good one for this plot? i was thinking something along the lines of 'blah blah revenge blah' ' blah blah paying the rent blah' you get the idea. anyway, if anyone could think of a good one, that would be awesome?

i haven't written anything yet, but if i do, could i use it? or anyone else who chooses to write a story about this.

thanks.

XOXO

 

[sirhugs]

i like the idea alot, almost enough to take it and start writing, but i've never been good at coming up with titles, does anyone have a good one for this plot? i was thinking something along the lines of 'blah blah revenge blah' ' blah blah paying the rent blah' you get the idea. anyway, if anyone could think of a good one, that would be awesome?

i haven't written anything yet, but if i do, could i use it? or anyone else who chooses to write a story about this.

thanks.

XOXO

lol



how about " The Landlord's wife Collects the Rent"?

 

[pop_54]

Hi

i like the idea alot, almost enough to take it and start writing, but i've never been good at coming up with titles, does anyone have a good one for this plot? i was thinking something along the lines of 'blah blah revenge blah' ' blah blah paying the rent blah' you get the idea. anyway, if anyone could think of a good one, that would be awesome?

i haven't written anything yet, but if i do, could i use it? or anyone else who chooses to write a story about this.

thanks.

XOXO

Hi nice to meet you, welcome to the mad house HR.

How about: "Payback Time" or "Payback's a bitch" or "Payment in Kind" or "Rent Girls". The list is endless, but always try to keep your titles catchy yet short if you can, readers are attracted by a catchy title.

Have a go at writing this tale HR or you MZ, it's not as hard as it seems to write an acceptable story as long as you keep your first few attempts short and sweet and don't try to be too high-brow or clever with the big words, they're wasted on the average Lit reader anyway.

Just pen it all as it comes from your brain in MS Word, spell/Gramar check it, then read it back to yourself, if you're happy with it, post it.
If either of you need any help, as friend sirhugs said, PM one of us nice friendly authors, or one of the miserable ones, hehe!!


pops...........

 

[sirhugs]

I love " Payback Time"

 

[snooper]

Re: Hi

... then read it back to yourself, ...

ALOUD, Pops. You forgt to tell HR to read it aloud to herself. I never finish a story, or even a chapter without blessing the day someone gave me that advice.