Please Help... I'm Blocked!

[THROBBS]

is it hot in here, or is it just me??

FOOK AN A! IT IS!!!!... looking at your AV!

If that is you ... then it is "just you"!

 

[THROBBS]

Thank you for the encouragement & the whip-cracking!

I'm 'clocking in' at about 400 words – edited though
(I do wish I could 'unlearn' the neurotic urge to edit as I go)

Sadly, no sex yet... It seems to be taking on a 'battle against time / self-pitying / aging theme' (and that's NOT too damned sexy, is it?)

That can be worked out.
building emotion, engagement and sympathy for the characters is first.

Edit later!

Pour it out now.

There is a great deal of beauty in age.
What's the song...? "the Story"Brandi Carlile
the beauty of past loves and physical beauty...and the memories of the same. The shared experiences... which will lead to more and deeper ones. Partners age too...and love softens the lens.

 

[THROBBS]

grasps that emotion!!! and write it with passion.

 

[Unsung Muse]

grasps that emotion!!! and write it with passion.

where have you been all my <literotica> life... ?

 

[Chantilyvamp]

I'm starting to get that whole bad habit of editing as i go and its not working so well since I dont have a clue what I'm doing. Hope yours goes better.

 

[THROBBS]

where have you been all my <literotica> life... ?

I've been here.

all of it and then some.... no one ever called on me.

 

[Unsung Muse]

I'm starting to get that whole bad habit of editing as i go and its not working so well since I dont have a clue what I'm doing. Hope yours goes better.

It's a crippling habit, IMO... It can really slow you down and interrupt the flow,
but I've heard many valid counter-arguments as well. I can't seem to break it,
so I guess I'll just have to learn to embrace it


"procrastination" is my true bane

 

[THROBBS]

It's a crippling habit, IMO... It can really slow you down and interrupt the flow,
but I've heard many valid counter-arguments as well. I can't seem to break it,
so I guess I'll just have to learn to embrace it


"procrastination" is my true bane

Wrong!
embrace this!

Editting will come.... the meat needs to be there...trim the fat later. There will always be editting, but write while the muse is HOT.

and Do it NOW.

yoompin' yimmminies, woman!

 

[THROBBS]

NOW YOUR PM BOX is also "blocked"!

how am I to "crack the whip?"


multi tasking???

I gather that you are writing (and NOT editing) while you are on LIT....

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Wrong!
embrace this!

Editting will come.... the meat needs to be there...trim the fat later. There will always be editting, but write while the muse is HOT.

and Do it NOW.

yoompin' yimmminies, woman!

Amen, brotha! Preachin' to the choir...


Musie, dearest... Lit is Prime Procrastination Territory, ya know?

 

[THROBBS]

Amen, brotha! Preachin' to the choir...


Musie, dearest... Lit is Prime Procrastination Territory, ya know?

As George Foreman said: "I may be Old and I may be fat, but here I is"

procastinatin' is I.

So...

Unsung, clean out your box, read some PMs, Post to 4 threads max. and back to writing. She feels time is slipping away... her lost youth... yet there she is... the subject of intense and passionate scrutiny.

 

[THROBBS]

huh?

Did she actually listen to me?

Nobody ever listens to me.

 

[Unsung Muse]

you are correct, sir
... my inbox was full


hey, i'm a popular gal


Yes, I'm writing!!! Yay!!!

 

[THROBBS]

you are correct, sir
... my inbox was full


hey, i'm a popular gal


Yes, I'm writing!!! Yay!!!

Whew!


next!
(she just said that, so I would quit pestering her. Much nicer than telling me to "piss-off"))

 

[Unsung Muse]

WOOT! ... only about 150 left to polish it off ...


this one's going to end up in the
"non-erotic" cat though, sorry

 

[THROBBS]

WOOT! ... only about 150 left to polish it off ...


this one's going to end up in the
"non-erotic" cat though, sorry

so?
The idea was to get writing. To UNblock. After this, get on to all the other fine suggestions.

 

[Unsung Muse]

so?
The idea was to get writing. To UNblock. After this, get on to all the other fine suggestions.

I am deeply indebted for the "unblock"

still, not sure I have a viable story in the works here...
may I PM it to you for thoughts/advice/suggestions?

 

[THROBBS]

I am deeply indebted for the "unblock"

still, not sure I have a viable story in the works here...
may I PM it to you for thoughts/advice/suggestions?

Of course!
But I am a lousy writer. And a crappy editor.

 

[Unsung Muse]

well, you succeeded in kicking my ass and i actually *finished* one
sadly, during a nasty bout of insomnia

way too much wine & whine involved
...turned into a bit of a pity-party

but i've submitted it anyway



THANK YOU FOR UNBLOCKING ME!!!

 

[THROBBS]

well, you succeeded in kicking my ass and i actually *finished* one
sadly, during a nasty bout of insomnia

way too much wine & whine involved
...turned into a bit of a pity-party

but i've submitted it anyway



THANK YOU FOR UNBLOCKING ME!!!

me?

You're welcome. But really you were easy. I know just enough about you (virtually nothing), to be able to guess at one of your buttons.

 

[Unsung Muse]

Hey! Wait a second...
Did you just call me easy?

 

[THROBBS]

maybe