Please help! Alternate endings for Promise made, vow broken

montanaboy12

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I am hoping for someone to pick up the story from the kitchen (I have read the alternate endings and none of Bobby winning) and i have 4 options that maybe someone could explore? Please?

A. Bobby is forceful enough to talk her out of it and they go back to the room and Bobby fucks her instead of making love to her, reigniting their relationship.
B. Bobby has been taking kick boxing classes at lunch and follows her in and punches Jackson out. Then he either takes her back to the room or better yet, claims his wife right there in the master bedroom in front of jackson.
C. She goes back to jacksons room, realizes he isn't who she wants, leaves and goes and absolutely fucks the hell out of her husband--he sees that THIS is what she wants sometimes and it reignites their relationship.
D. My least favorite....Bobby follows and he and Jackson double team his wife all night. On the way home they talk about swinging or respectful cucking or open marriage with communication.......

But PLEASE someone write something where she doesn't do it. Where THEY are ones making the noises in the morning and both come down satisfied. I am not a writer but really really would love to see someone take up one of the ideas or one of your own where somehow she doesn't sleep with jackson and they fix things......Anyone?
 
It's charitably called bad form to use other author's characters, works, creative output, etc. in your own works.

I see no linkage that suggests you are the author and they haven't contributed to this tread permission or interest in having their work reimagined.

Most authors don't want to use others ideas or, if they do, will want 100% clarity they have permission/blessing to do so.

Assist others in obtaining that permission and you might just see your alternative endings see the light of day.
 
My apologies--they have given their permission for a couple of alternate endings already--I mean no disrespect. I have written the authors as well. Again, I do not mean to offend or use "bad form". Thank you for the advice.
 
My apologies--they have given their permission for a couple of alternate endings already--I mean no disrespect. I have written the authors as well. Again, I do not mean to offend or use "bad form". Thank you for the advice.
No need to apologize.

If you really want these alternatives to see the light of day, you could have the author post in this thread.

Anything you can do to make it easier for the future author to get the permission will get you faster to your end goal.
 
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