Please don't be sick of me... <3 Peach

[dpeach86]

Hey guys,

I sincerely hope you all are not yet sick of me, as I know I've been poking my noes around quite a bit on the bulletin board.

I have a question, I'm not quite sure that it belongs here, but I'll pose it anyway, if there's an issue I can always relocate it to the story feedback board.

I need the help of a Catholic (preferably practicing) to aid me in making a more realistic sounding dialogue in a story. The particular scene I'm having difficulty with is in a confessional (big surprise, right?). I've looking around the net and can't seem to find the particular "script" a priest goes through, though.

Any help would be greatly appreciated.

<3 Peach

 

[gauchecritic]

Just a bump before it falls off the page.

All I know is:"Forgive me Father, for I have sinned..."

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Oh damn, I had a script once, but I can't find it... I had to look it up when I wrote Under Mr Nolan's Bed... but here's another site that might help:

Confession

 

[Lisa Denton]

Just a bump before it falls off the page.

All I know is:"Forgive me Father, for I have sinned..."

Thats the beginning G, then at the end the priest says "say two Hail Mary's for having group sex with elephants" or something like that.