Lili
Really Experienced
- Joined
- Sep 2, 2001
- Posts
- 155
Hi,
I have recently posted my first story to Literotica.
I would really like to hear what the other authors, editors and readers think.
My author name is Lili, and my story is called Going Home. It is posted in the BDSM category (although it's very light BDSM).
You can reach it at: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=23082
I have already received a couple of emails from people who read and liked it, but no one has offered constructive criticism yet. I would really like to improve my writing, so please feel free to contact me or post here and let me know what you think.
Thanks!
Lili
I have recently posted my first story to Literotica.
I would really like to hear what the other authors, editors and readers think.
My author name is Lili, and my story is called Going Home. It is posted in the BDSM category (although it's very light BDSM).
You can reach it at: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=23082
I have already received a couple of emails from people who read and liked it, but no one has offered constructive criticism yet. I would really like to improve my writing, so please feel free to contact me or post here and let me know what you think.
Thanks!
Lili
