Please check out my story.

[Leon22]

I recently posted a story titled "Emily's New Job" (Group) and I'd like some feedback from people. Just post a comment on the story or write me with your feedback and ideas.
Just to let you know it is the sequel to another story I wrote called "Date At The Drive In" (Incest/Taboo) which you may want to read first. Although please be gentle with the comments on that one sense I was a moron and didn't proofread it before I posted it and now there are tons of spelling errors.
Both stories take place in the Busty Teacher series by Zaxxon. You should read all of his too because they are all great. He has posted a chronological order of the stories in that series (although he hasn't added mine in yet) so you should check them out.
Thanks again, and here are the links to my stories and to Zaxxon's list. And Zaxxon if you're reading this, thanks, you rule.

Zaxxon: http://www.literotica.com:81/stories/memberpage.php?uid=118610

Date At The Drive In: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=162952

Emily's New Job: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=166409

 

[vargas111]

Why don't you edit and re-post the earlier story that you say has the errors.

I'm sure someone here can tell you how to do it.

Or ask on the How To forum.

Trying to read a story with lots of errors will just turn people off, so its worth the effort