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Brain thaw

I'd be a lot happier if my brain would unthaw, but c'est la guerre.

Watching "My Name Is Earl" - okay, this is fucking brilliant.

BrettJ

Author / TV fan / Studmuppet
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
I read the poem also. :D
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Oh, and I was gonna say in response to part of your comments to me... I'm too tired and too lazy to go open that page again. lol .... but I was going to say, that was the story I just resubmitted, and it's still pending. It's all fixt ;) now thanks to Brett. :D
 
Yw

You are welcome SHANNON hun.

I am just finishing up one other job and then I am going to TRY to work on one of my own.

BrettJ

Author / Editing / Studmuppet
 
BrettJ said:
You are welcome SHANNON hun.

I am just finishing up one other job and then I am going to TRY to work on one of my own.

BrettJ

Author / Editing / Studmuppet
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I may give my eyes a rest tomorrow, too much work, too much writing, too much time on here... I think these are all contributing factors to my headaches. I need new glasses, but unless I win the lottery anytime soon, it will be a little while before I get them. Tomorrow night is gonna be beer night! I need to unwind! :nana: Wish I had company tho.... anybody wanna come over and give me a massage? :devil:
 
I will have to get around to reading all of your stories soon. are there any suggestions on where to start?
 
shannon_est said:
Wow! I'm really touched. I'm at a loss for words really.

Very cool... you're on the top lists! :) :nana:
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The poem was excellent, and I see alot of me in your poetry... (look... a poet... )



OMG!!!!!

I just checked all those lists...

I have 16 on them... ranging in catagories of course... very cool.. I will have to look at the lists more often :D :D :D
 
art64 said:
I will have to get around to reading all of your stories soon. are there any suggestions on where to start?
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Red, Angel and Brett all have great stories. The links are in their signatures...
I have 1, but I'm waiting on the edited version to be posted in its place...
Not sure who else on this thread has stories... I don't venture out much. lol :nana:
 
art64 said:
I will have to get around to reading all of your stories soon. are there any suggestions on where to start?
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What are you into ???

24 Hours is a good one (m/f)
Met on the Net is great (m/f)
Penny's Passions (f/f) (f/f/f/f) (4 women-3men)
Drive-In (f/m/f/m)

Art... I like them all...

Witnessing.. (f/m/f)


okay.. stopping now.. just like them all and I really can't tell you where to start. :D
 
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RED's story "A Fantasy Realised" is well worth checking out art, if you want something to read.

I have 72 stories posted on LIT - never sure of my own work, but some seem to like it, although I have liked some of my newer ones.

SHANNON - if you can read and type at the computer without your glasses, don't use them. If the prescription is wrong or out of date, no QUESTION it is contributing to the headaches.

BrettJ

Author / Can't Read Screen without his / Studmuppet
 
RedHairedandFriendly said:
The poem was excellent, and I see alot of me in your poetry... (look... a poet... )



OMG!!!!!

I just checked all those lists...

I have 16 on them... ranging in catagories of course... very cool.. I will have to look at the lists more often :D :D :D
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WTG on 16!!!! Wow!

Last nite, the discussion of writing, editing, poetry continued after you went to bed... don't know if you read the posts... Brett attempted one after I mentioned that the poem I posted wasn't my usual style. The ones I used to write always rhymed.... and this one was my reply to his...

Dark and angry they tend to be
Poems of anquish, known to me
Line by line my pain subsides
Washed away like ebbing tides

What once was pain
My words have slain
They ease my aching soul
Once again, I feel whole

We got silly, and digressed into Dr. Seuss style 'erotic' *cough* poetry. If you want a good laugh, go back and read... I think (if you use default settings) it's on page 1272 or 1273.
 
BrettJ said:
SHANNON - if you can read and type at the computer without your glasses, don't use them. If the prescription is wrong or out of date, no QUESTION it is contributing to the headaches.

BrettJ

Author / Can't Read Screen without his / Studmuppet
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I'd have my nose to the monitor if I didn't have my glasses on, I'm making a trip to the eye doctor this week I think. Most exams are fairly cheap. It will be the cost of the glasses that will kill me and I'll have to wait a couple of paydays for. :rolleyes:
 
shannon_est said:
WTG on 16!!!! Wow!

Last nite, the discussion of writing, editing, poetry continued after you went to bed... don't know if you read the posts... Brett attempted one after I mentioned that the poem I posted wasn't my usual style. The ones I used to write always rhymed.... and this one was my reply to his...

Dark and angry they tend to be
Poems of anquish, known to me
Line by line my pain subsides
Washed away like ebbing tides

What once was pain
My words have slain
They ease my aching soul
Once again, I feel whole

We got silly, and digressed into Dr. Seuss style 'erotic' *cough* poetry. If you want a good laugh, go back and read... I think (if you use default settings) it's on page 1272 or 1273.
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I'll look them up...

Here is my Dr. Suess... read like Cat in the Hat

A Silly Ditty
by RedHairedandFriendly ©

I came into town,
not making a sound.
Soon my horse stopped,
its leg in a knot.

I jumped off his back,
and heard a great crack.
I looked to my left,
then to my right.
My sight did behold
such a glorious fight.

He was bronzed by the sun,
his body glistened with sweat.
I stood there and waited,
wondered what would come next.

Would he grab the man's head
or just leave him for dead?

Looking again, my heart did beat fast,
the man was beating a lad and a lass.
Grabbing a log,
I aimmed at the frog.

Though he was handsome,
and physically fit.
His manner was brash,
not fit for a kiss.

His looks were nice,
his manners were not.

I advanced slowly
not a sound did I make.
Soon I was hiding
behind the great rake.

I raise up my log,
brought it down with a thump.
He turned as his head,
started to lump.

"What have you done,
you simpleton?"

"I have struck you, you knave,
now you go and behave."

"Be have? We will see,
I'll be back to get you
at a quarter till three!"

My body did shiver,
his threat made me quiver.
I turned on my heel,
and started to reel.

Great words of disgust,
filled the air and the dust.
"We'll see who will lead.
In this game you will plead!"

As I came to my home,
my heart full of wonder.
I felt a small tingle
begin way down under.

Soon I was eating my supper alone,
and my red wine had found it a home.
Retiring for the night,
my eyes now full of fright.

"Did he mean a quarter past three...
in the morning or evening,
soon we would see."

My eyes grew heavy,
ladened for rest.
I saw his head in my mind,
Wow... what a test!

I ached and I moaned full of such luck,
oh how I wanted him to just suck.
Feeling the wetness between my legs cum,
I opened my eyes and looked up above.

His eyes, golden hued,
his body sun kissed.
He was taking me over
a great big abyss.

"You pleasure me well,
with your cock that has swelled."

His smile is wide
as I hear him sigh,
"Take in my tongue
and I'll make you cum."

My face blushes red,
my hair is a fire.
All of my hope
and all my desires.
I close my eyes
as his lips do try.

To gather me up,
and release me real slow.
Soon I tell him,
soon I will go.

He chuckles he sighs
and makes my soul cry.
The heat from my loins
releases such passion.

It is all I can hold
to keep from a thrashin'

"Don't stop!" I call out.
"Don't quit!" I do shout.

He thrusts and he grinds,
I moan the whole time.

And when we are done,
he calls me, "Hon."

The End
 
thanks for the help It seems like a lot of "hard " work but I think I'll manage
 
All I can say is ....

NARF! lol

I try to change my style somewhat - or perhaps my subject matter - when I write. For example, when I write a "Novel" I rarely write more than one Chapter at a time, I usually write something else, come back to the Novel, write something else, something else - I have a few ongoings now, although one other will be completed shortly.

I've also found myself doing "sequels" out of stories people liked or making "novels" out of short stories.

I still don't know if I am a good writer, but getting positive feedback is making me believe I am. Though, as said previously, I really LIKED a few of my last ones.

BrettJ

Author / Tough Critic / Studmuppet
 
BrettJ said:
NARF! lol

I try to change my style somewhat - or perhaps my subject matter - when I write. For example, when I write a "Novel" I rarely write more than one Chapter at a time, I usually write something else, come back to the Novel, write something else, something else - I have a few ongoings now, although one other will be completed shortly.

I've also found myself doing "sequels" out of stories people liked or making "novels" out of short stories.

I still don't know if I am a good writer, but getting positive feedback is making me believe I am. Though, as said previously, I really LIKED a few of my last ones.

BrettJ

Author / Tough Critic / Studmuppet
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Still trying to figure out the difference between sequels and chapters. :p :rolleyes: lol :nana:



Hi Shreik! :kiss:
 
Alright gents and ladies... I'm off to bed. I wasn't planning on staying this long tonight, but it did me some good. :D My :heart: is lighter having spent some time with some wonderful friends. Y'all make a girl :)

Have a good nite! :kiss:
 
Good night

Sleep well SHANNON and I hope the Pvt I sent helps.

Later girl.

BrettJ

Author / Still here / Studmuppet
 
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