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corndog_

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Doors, Three of Them

I stood outside your wooden door all night
studying the grain. It was a sepia river
of images passing. I saw
a small bear, one paw upturned; and a face
with sleepy eyes that seemed to say
“The bed is warm. Put down your book.”

::

This door groans
on its hinges, has scuff-
marks from heels and
corners of boxes. This
door has four coats
of paint revealed in chips
and a brass knob patina’d
by a thousand palms.
This door demands
to be opened.

::

At last a door that leads
nowhere; no more furniture
and fascination. I can’t look
at a mountain or moosehead
or say “Persia is the origin
of anything worth eating”
or touch the bust
of a Scottish king. Too much
scrutiny. I want a space with nothing
to distract us, and a door
we can lock from within.
 
wonderful set of images you gift us, corndog, strung together so neatly on your string of sound ...

lovely write! thankyou for visions :rose:
 
i read this again, and saw things i missed first time around. i love it when a poem/book/film does that ... offers more on further inspection *nods*
 
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