This is an idea that I had and wondered if any one could improve it or give other ideas to go along with this. husband and wife get invited to party at neighbors house. when we get there the neighbors are dancing so we join in and have a few glasses of wine. later that evening the neighbors husband wants to see my manhood. I am shocked and dont know what to say .I never dreamed it could happen so I turn to my wife and she says go ahead honey it will be okay. So the neighbors husband seduces me as this is my first time and he makes me feel good about the whole thing.So the women are alone and we want them to watch us while we watch them. The neighbors wife unzips my wifes dress and wants her to take it off. she smiles and says she is sorry but she cant. a few minutes later she is asked nicely to take off her dress. she says she cant.. The Neighbors Husband gets mad and shouts thats enough! He then slaps my wife and grabs her dress ripping it down the front and when he slaps her she goes over the coffee table and lands on the couch. Can someone take it fom there?
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Should you be outting his identity? I remember when I was "yelled" at (you were one of them) for "outting" Nascar when he posted an idea as Unregistered. 
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I'll gladly wait for the sequel then!
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BlessedBe said:
I wouldn't have thought of it unless they were so similar - it seemed to make more sense if he'd given *me* his screen name, and stayed anonymous on the boards...
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(not defending myself, just telling you my reasoning)
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Re: de ja vu
Damn....I was thinking the same thing. Seems like I saw this one before. It must be something to it.
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Damn....I was thinking the same thing. Seems like I saw this one before. It must be something to it.
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Hmm
Sounds like that's when you kick the fucking crap out of the guy for hitting your wife, I would and I don't think you'll get any understanding or sympathy from the average porn reading macho man either.
Unless you can put in a bit of bad feeling between you and wifey that would make you want to see her hurt and raped before the event you detail I don't think it will wash unless you do take action to stop her abuse and damn soon.
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Sounds like that's when you kick the fucking crap out of the guy for hitting your wife, I would and I don't think you'll get any understanding or sympathy from the average porn reading macho man either.
Unless you can put in a bit of bad feeling between you and wifey that would make you want to see her hurt and raped before the event you detail I don't think it will wash unless you do take action to stop her abuse and damn soon.
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Re: Hmm
I agree, but even if you want her smacked around, you will still need to bust the guy up for hitting your girlfriend/wife.
pop_54 said:Sounds like that's when you kick the fucking crap out of the guy for hitting your wife, I would and I don't think you'll get any understanding or sympathy from the average porn reading macho man either.
Unless you can put in a bit of bad feeling between you and wifey that would make you want to see her hurt and raped before the event you detail I don't think it will wash unless you do take action to stop her abuse and damn soon.
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I agree, but even if you want her smacked around, you will still need to bust the guy up for hitting your girlfriend/wife.
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I guess some people will never understand the fantasy...
And, not being female makes it harder for them.
And, not being female makes it harder for them.
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I think the first one was something like, the guy is getting fucked by this man and the guy's wife is reluctant to take her clothes off for the man's wife. The man goes over and smacks the guy's wife, rips her clothes off and fucks her with his shit stained cock, all while the guy watches.
Not hard to understand, just hard to digest.
Not hard to understand, just hard to digest.
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Hi
Hi:
I think a lot of men do manage to understand fantasy, I write about it myself, but for it to make sense to the general readers of porn stories it needs to be believable fantasy, something they can relate to actually happening.
Maybe some of the female readers will dream of being knocked over a coffee table and fucked without their permission, but I think a large number of females and males will take one look laugh and switch off.
Surely the idea of writing a story is for someone to actually read it, I have no problem with a guy watching his wife being raped idea. Sounds like fun.
I was just trying to help this author put a bit more explaination into the story when I posted the reply not making some sexist based remarks.
The author asked for suggestions in the first place did they not.
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Hi:
I think a lot of men do manage to understand fantasy, I write about it myself, but for it to make sense to the general readers of porn stories it needs to be believable fantasy, something they can relate to actually happening.
Maybe some of the female readers will dream of being knocked over a coffee table and fucked without their permission, but I think a large number of females and males will take one look laugh and switch off.
Surely the idea of writing a story is for someone to actually read it, I have no problem with a guy watching his wife being raped idea. Sounds like fun.
I was just trying to help this author put a bit more explaination into the story when I posted the reply not making some sexist based remarks.
The author asked for suggestions in the first place did they not.
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BlackSnake said:
Really now?
The thread starter never said anything about a "shit stained cock". He never even said anything about having anal sex with the neighbor!Not to mention, NEVER in my life has a man had a "shit stained cock" after giving me anal sex.
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pop_54 said:
I never said "men don't understand fantasy". Hell, everyone has their own fantasies. But, you are not a woman with a rape fantasy, therefore you do not understand why some women have them. And, it seems obvious it's not your cup of tea, as a man, unlike the thread starter who obviously was interested in what he said.
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Re: Hi
*my nonconsent stories get more reads than any others besides incest. A huge number of people out there have rape fantasies, both men and women.
One of the spectacular things about lit is that there is an audience for EVERYTHING. All of the stories get read. Don't assume that something isn't going to turn a huge number of people on - I have stories with 50,000 reads...that's a whole lot of perverts.
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ps - never took your comments to be sexist.
pop_54 said:
*my nonconsent stories get more reads than any others besides incest. A huge number of people out there have rape fantasies, both men and women.
pop_54 said:
One of the spectacular things about lit is that there is an audience for EVERYTHING. All of the stories get read. Don't assume that something isn't going to turn a huge number of people on - I have stories with 50,000 reads...that's a whole lot of perverts.
Chicklet
ps - never took your comments to be sexist.
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BlessedBe said:Really now?
Not to mention, NEVER in my life has a man had a "shit stained cock" after giving me anal sex.
Let me tell you, I've seen this identical story idea before. Recently here. "I think the first one was something like,..."
The previous story idea had what I stated in it.
If a guy is riding your asshole bareback, you better RECOGNIZE! Ignorance, just puts you at risk, that's all.
And, since I can't understand why a woman would have fantasies about being raped, why don't you enlighten me. I mean really, if the near dealth experience thrills you.
There is no love nor lust in rape. It's I'm going to hurt you and you are going to remember this for a very long time. Wanna get raped. Just put yourself out there. We live in one of the most violent societies on the face of the earth. It shouldn't be too difficult for you to get the real deal. And, I'm not talking about someone who you are familar with forcing himself on you. I'm talking about, when the guy hits you, something breaks. When he pushing you to the floor your skull cracks. You know, live action. Loss of consciousness, broken bones. The things that has happen to women 5 times a minute everyday in this country (According to the NCIC most recent report - 12:50PM 02/04/2003).
Now the fantasy story will have even me on the edge of my seat.
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Re: Re: Hi
More about the story. Like I was staying before, there must be something to it.
With what is known about the idea, the background can be filled in by the writter. The details are what's going to make the story more vivid. This seem like one that could have my heart beating fast as I read it. "The intensity, the excitment, the thrill, the drama."
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More about the story. Like I was staying before, there must be something to it.
With what is known about the idea, the background can be filled in by the writter. The details are what's going to make the story more vivid. This seem like one that could have my heart beating fast as I read it. "The intensity, the excitment, the thrill, the drama."
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generally speaking
okay, this has gone a little bit away from a story idea discussion, and while i want to keep debating, i dont' want to do it here.
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nonconsent fantasies
okay, this has gone a little bit away from a story idea discussion, and while i want to keep debating, i dont' want to do it here.
check it out
nonconsent fantasies
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Quite so, good scheme, I'll pop over to it and have a chat on the subject.
But on my original point, I had no objection to rape fantasy at all, as I said good subject, all I was pointing out was the normal human reaction of any normal married man.
I don't know any man who'd stand by and enjoy the sight of his wife being punched and knocked over a coffee table by another guy, without wishing to protect her in some way or strike back.
Perhaps it's a UK thing, I dont know, perhaps we're too damn straight laced over here and respect our ladies too much in reality.
I'd prefer the coffee table be dropped, there's no real way to go with it.
OK neighbour steps forward and tears the wife's dress down the front, she drops on to a sofa, (not coffee table), the husband finds his cock rising fast, he likes this.
The bitch has asked for this, all she had to do was agree, but oh no, she had to say no, she had to upset the fun party.
Now she's getting it, the bitch is getting what she needs.
The neighbour stands back and looks at the woman in her ripped dress, "Nice tits", He whispers.
"Let's see what else you got bitch" He mutters.
"Yes go on, do it, do the bitch" The husband whispers to himself.
"Go on Stan, do the slut, do her hard, then I want her" the neighbours wife urges.
"Yes, fuck her, fuck her guts out, go on Stan do it" The husband cries out excitedly.
OK enough of that crap, but it can be done without the bloody freekin coffee table, that's all I wanna say.
Love Ya all: pops..............
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Quite so, good scheme, I'll pop over to it and have a chat on the subject.
But on my original point, I had no objection to rape fantasy at all, as I said good subject, all I was pointing out was the normal human reaction of any normal married man.
I don't know any man who'd stand by and enjoy the sight of his wife being punched and knocked over a coffee table by another guy, without wishing to protect her in some way or strike back.
Perhaps it's a UK thing, I dont know, perhaps we're too damn straight laced over here and respect our ladies too much in reality.
I'd prefer the coffee table be dropped, there's no real way to go with it.
OK neighbour steps forward and tears the wife's dress down the front, she drops on to a sofa, (not coffee table), the husband finds his cock rising fast, he likes this.
The bitch has asked for this, all she had to do was agree, but oh no, she had to say no, she had to upset the fun party.
Now she's getting it, the bitch is getting what she needs.
The neighbour stands back and looks at the woman in her ripped dress, "Nice tits", He whispers.
"Let's see what else you got bitch" He mutters.
"Yes go on, do it, do the bitch" The husband whispers to himself.
"Go on Stan, do the slut, do her hard, then I want her" the neighbours wife urges.
"Yes, fuck her, fuck her guts out, go on Stan do it" The husband cries out excitedly.
OK enough of that crap, but it can be done without the bloody freekin coffee table, that's all I wanna say.
Love Ya all: pops..............
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