Parasite hive idea (not quite tentacles) + help request

[Nezhul]

SO I've got slitely sidetracked while I was brainstorming for tentacle ideas, and I'm going to do a hive idea instead.

The idea is that there's this huge hive-like mega organism that covers a formidable area with its body (a cave) and inside it the action takes place.

It uses some girls as a sort of portable wombs to grow its eggs inside of them. It immobilizes it into its "walls", and force-feeds them.

The other unlucky victim is transformed into a kind of futanari, and made to go around and fuck them and impregnate them with eggs. She is mobile and semi-autonomous, but strongly conditioned and compelled to follow her role through (the story will be about her btw and her development).

I have a few kinks to work through with this system though, and I need your ideas for that.

Luring method
In the story the girls are kinda delivered for the creature on purpose. But in the nature, how would it acquire women? The hive is immobile, so it has to somehow lure women in or dispatch something to hund for them.
1 - I thought of pheromones, like a scent that would lure females in close enough for it to grab and abduct them.
2 - The second "mobile" victim may be conditioned to go out and find more women, hunt for them. But the first batch needs to come from somewhere.

 

[John Blackhawk]

Honestly i think for something like this you should look to social insects like bees and ants for inspiration. Hell it worked for the aliens series.

 

[Nezhul]

Ants and bees don't really need to lure their members in to their nest anyhow

 

[Carnevil9]

Sound.

Ever hear locusts when they are in season? It is an almost hypnotic siren song that fills the air for miles. I could imagine some fresh young maiden, out picking daisies and enjoying the spring sunshine, suddenly hearing that type of sound, and being overwhelmingly driven to investigate it.

Unless it is from outer space, the hive-organism might even have evolved the sound to be specifically attractive to human victims, in a sort of symbiotic evolutionary process.

 

[Nezhul]

It is from outer space. I was thinking about scent though.
Sounds are generally scary or alarming to humans because we use our hearing to avoid danger. We don't use it to verify anything good. But with scent we use it a lot and it attracts us to good things (food)

 

[John Blackhawk]

Ants and bees don't really need to lure their members in to their nest anyhow

well you don't understand i wasn't talking from a stand point of "lure their members in to their nest" I was talking more in terms of planning. Because you see ants, bees and the like have different kinds of ants/bees for different jobs. Like for example a queen bee is different from a drone or worker bee.

 

[Zionisacat]

Sound.

Ever hear locusts when they are in season? It is an almost hypnotic siren song that fills the air for miles. I could imagine some fresh young maiden, out picking daisies and enjoying the spring sunshine, suddenly hearing that type of sound, and being overwhelmingly driven to investigate it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PzZ0B8221UE

Not sure if this is movie BS or legitimate?

 

[Nezhul]

may as well be. You never know how instects really process the sound. To begin with, it's the matter of processing and interpretation. They may not even treat sound like we are at all, and instead feel it differently.

 

[Nezhul]

Let me ask you another question.

I basically want to make this story less non-con and more about a girl enjoying herself very much. She'll still be scared deeply at first, of course, and will show some reluctance and such, but I want her to like it.

How unrealistic it would feel if when she first finds about her predicament she's both scared and excited? Like, she's been a pervert deep in her head all her life and knew that. Masturbated to exactly this kinds of scenarios - of being trapped and used like a cattle.
She's still reluctant and sad to give her life away for this, but her pussy gets wet and she'll be much more accepting of her fate and all the weird stuff that happens later on.

Will that break your suspense of disbelief?

 

[Zionisacat]

It would break my sense of disbelief but if you could gear it closer to the non-con crowd, there's not a doubt in my mind that this would find an audience.

 

[Nezhul]

I've just finished a non-con novel and wanted to focus on different emotions in my next work to rest a bit.

I still kinda plan it to be edging on noncon, because she's goint to go through quite a bit of mental and sexual torture, but I want her to like it a bit more than my previous character liked her own adventure.

 

[rutger5]

I'd say make it more inspired by the Species movies. Have the main character's DNA blended with alien DNA so that though she is mostly human her brain is altered enough that the more she 'impregnates' human women the more she enjoys it and wants to do it.

Also you could have the cave located inside cliffs near California beaches, bringing a steady supply of nubile, bikini wearing hosts to the hive.

 

[Nezhul]

Yes, I could, but that would be brainwashing / mind control / dubious consent basically.

There'll be elements to it, but instead of starting to enjoy it she will be slowly getting accustomed to her job and losing remorse for doing what she does. SHe'll originally be very sorry and ashamed that she cant control her urges and is forced to force-fuck her mates, but she will be treating it as natural and okay later on.

But I want her to enjoy the sexual aspect of it all the way through. Through guilt, shame and embarrassment, but enjoy it.

Also this is cosmic era, so there won't be any planet earth at all. The girls are from a small colony and kidnapped by another race to be featured in a planetary zoo of one of their planets. Or rather - the hive creature is the exhibition, and they are the cattle for it.

Although it will be mentioned that humans are an exhibition in this zoo as well, because for aliens, mankind is nothing much more than another animal. So we can travel through space - so what? big deal.