Outline for my first storty(incest)- what do you think

[Daddy O]

Well hi there!
I just discovered this site and love it, especially this forum

I'm working on a story, the outline is

First chapter

happens after WW2, widowed ex Airforce pilot takes his scrawny very repressed 13 y/o daughter raised in a monastery after moms death, to live on a Philippines Island were he was based during the war.
They fly on an Airforce surplus plane he bought.
They crash land on a unknown island and are stranded
It’s a tropical island abundant with water, fruit and fish
The beginning is rocky but they get close as the girl goes from nerd to nymph.
The tension is inevitably leading to an explosive sexual encounter
They become insatiable lovers.

This first part is written, now I’m working to refine it since it’s the first I ever written.

2nd chapter
just starting on it,
Pilot and daughter discover a lost tribe of mixed origin on a trek to the other side of the island.
They watch from a distance as an unusual ritual of young virgins being initiated to womanhood by the chief their dad, brothers and uncles in a very steamy seductive erotic ceremony.

Sometime later the find a sultry 12 year old that escaped from the tribe
And…
lots of very graphic scenes of incestual lovemaking

What do u think so far?

 

[Guest]

Sounds good so far. Use the Voluntary Editors when you are nearer completion.

I work differently, in that I have a full outline at chapterheading level before I write any text, but everyone has their own way of working.

One word of caution though. Everyone has to be eighteen years old to have any sexual activities, or even ideas, on every respectable (i.e. legal) site I know, including this one.

My stuff is BDSM novels written for money and is not posted here, though I have a short story almost finalised to offer here.

Good luck with your story.

 

[Daddy O]

Something I didn't know

I didn't know about the age limit. I had thought that applied only to photo's and video's.
Well I don't really live in the States (used to),
so the chance of getting into trouble with this story, is none.
however if I can't post it here anyone have an idea were I can post it?

Got more stories coming up with no age problem

Question does father daughter incest (like in this story) offend anyone let me know, I can take the heat, I'm just curious to how people take it.

 

[Guest]

Sounds damm exciting, when can we read it?

Sounds exoticly interesting, an unusual idea and setting, especially the second part with that lost tribe ritual, sounds offbeat enough to be good.
just please, don't make mistakes like blurry sketchy details, and boring dry descriptions.

since its your first posting do what the man said and let the editors give you some advice.

Give us all the colorful point by point play.
perhaps you could publish the first part, get feedback and then improve on the second part.
in any case good luck.

I'm getting up the nerve to write my own story, soon.
HotBabe2001

 

[nasty]

No problem with ANY TYPE of incest. Just the age thing. I'm against all stuff of that nature. I eSPECIALLY like anal,(hint, hint.)

 

[slavewriter69]

No problem with ANY TYPE of incest. Just the age thing. I'm against all stuff of that nature. I eSPECIALLY like anal,(hint, hint.)

i'm very against the age thing the age 18+ is good for a story
btw my dad and older brother had sex with me i was a child
thats why i'm not for incest but to each his own

slavewriter69