Orgasm Denial Idea!

[Guest]

HI all!

I had this idea about an orgasm denial story...It's going to be used as a form of torture on a prisoner of war (?). I have'nt worked out the complete plot yet, but I can say that he is an undercover spy, and is discovered. He is then taken to the head of the organization where he was working undercover and it happens that the leader is a real expert at teasing. The story will then proceed about the methods she uses to extract info from him about his real mission objective and how much info he has gethered so far...Is it interesting or is it trash? You tell me!

Take care,

Blueballed

 

[Ransom]

I think I may be living this story to a certain degree.......

 

[Guest]

Really?

Hey there ransom!

Tell me about your situation...

 

[Guest]

Re: Really?

Hey there ransom!

Tell me about your situation...

Blueballed

 

[Guest]

Do we have more than one "Unregistered" here, or is someone so bored they're quoting themselves?

Just a friendly reminder, registering at Lit is free and it keeps us from confusion!

 

[sirhugs]

I think I may be living this story to a certain degree.......

you're a spy in prison? really?
and you get to use puters?
ever think of sending your HQ a message?

 

[blueballed]

Just me

Sorry, that was just me, before and after registering in the forum...Just wanted to let everyone know that I had posted the last message...I really wonder what ransom's story is...Any clues Ransom?

 

[blueballed]

Hello?!?!?

Hey there people? Anyone wanna give me a good idea on how to get on with this???? Is everyone in hibernation or what? I see 69 views but just 6 replies???? That's awesome (dripping with sarcasm)!!

 

[Chicklet]

it will be interesting if you do it right. do it wrong and it'll be trash. i suggest that if you want to know that you're on the right track you go to the "story feedback" forum and look for someone to read it over for you. say something along the lines of "Looking for someone to bounce ideas/rough drafts off of" and you'll find helpful people.

chicklet

ps - best of luck

 

[sirhugs]

whispersecret has a " 500 word" thread where she critiques your first 500 words, at story Feedback. I quit replying, because I think it will be hard to write a believable story using this plot. If you can't make it believable, you hafta resort to campy, which is even harder.

 

[NASCARaddicted]

I have to ask: Does it have to be a prison camp and all that stuff ?

I think there was a similar story idea, some weeks ago. But in this story, it wasn't a prison camp. It was a guy who spyed - on the pyjama party (or maybe better: the pool party) of his sister. He enjoys to peek at all the girls in their underwear. He gets a hard one, and maybe he also starts to masturbate.

But suddenly, the girls discover him, with his dick in his hand. The girls want to torture him a little bit for his peeking.

They grab him and tie im on a chair, while his dick is still standing out of his fly. Then, one of the girls gets a feather and starts to tickle his dick (they don't want to touch it directly). They could also tease him with a striptease ... Short before the boy cums, the girl stops. And maybe they pour some cold water over his dick. Then, they tickle him again - but again, they stop short before he cums ...

They repeat this for some time, until they get tired of it ...

And then, one after the other, the girls leave, while the girl is still sitting next to the pool, tied on the chair with his dick hanging out ...

Some time later, the last girl (or maybe his own sister) walks out to the pool, because she forgot something. She sees the boy, and now, since she is alone, she feels sorry for him. She decides to give him the blowjob of his life ... or maybe she sits on his lap and has sex with him

You can say, he had a lot of foreplay

 

[blueballed]

Thank you!

Thank you NASCAR! That was really great! Could you tell me what the name or author of this story was? I could go through that story first and see if the setting and the outcome can be re-written...Thanks to chicklet too. Take care

 

[NASCARaddicted]

as far as I can remember, it wasn't a full story, it was just a story idea.

Maybe you should search a little bit on this board, for something like "slumber party" or "pyjama party" ...