Opinions on Category--I'm confuzalated

Esperanza_Hidalgo

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The story is 16K words and lesbian themed with a major sci-fi angle. It is the first act of a three act novel. It contains three downplayed sex scenes: hetero, female masturbation, and lesbian.

I can't decide on the category. It is written with lesbian interest in mind. Specifically, feminist ideology in a theocratic society where queer are outcasts; likened somewhat to our own struggles as a country against racism in the sixties--consider what would happen if fundies came to power.

Opinions? Suggestions? The story is finished; I just can't decide on a cat.

The story is here on google docs. Opinions and criticism are always appreciated. The prior link has HTML coding. You will need to ignore it.
 
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that's a toughy. take away the hetero and i'd say lesbian, but with the hetero i think you almost have to stick it in scifi to avoid whiners taking a big dump on you for the het stuff. of course, i haven't read it because i'm feeling lazy, but judging from your description that would be my choice.
 
that's a toughy. take away the hetero and i'd say lesbian, but with the hetero i think you almost have to stick it in scifi to avoid whiners taking a big dump on you for the het stuff. of course, i haven't read it because i'm feeling lazy, but judging from your description that would be my choice.

Thank you,

No doubt, I need to expect to get trolled at either place. I would probably have to post under a new alt to get away from the folks who seem to gift their lovely ones--my private fan club (of course, maybe I just suck *smile*).

Anyway, I love posting here because you get so many reads and find folks willing to help you improve.

Scifi seems the better fit considering the tenor of the hetero sex scene, which is sweet.

To anyone else reading this, comments are invited.
 
From the early peek you allowed me, I would definitely go Sci-Fi & Fantasy--now I'm going to read on Google:) xx
 
From the early peek you allowed me, I would definitely go Sci-Fi & Fantasy--now I'm going to read on Google:) xx

EH,

Based on your description, I'd go sci-fi. As has been said, it's best to avoid mixing hetero in with the lez. Plus, the sci-fi readers are quite fun. In my limited experience (one story) they seem to leave more comments, and more interesting ones.

G'luck,

-PF
 
From the early peek you allowed me, I would definitely go Sci-Fi & Fantasy--now I'm going to read on Google:) xx

Yes, it's what I am doing. Seems like the best choice by far. I just read through it again and found some things--if you see anything fridayam, lemme know. :heart:

EH,

Based on your description, I'd go sci-fi. As has been said, it's best to avoid mixing hetero in with the lez. Plus, the sci-fi readers are quite fun. In my limited experience (one story) they seem to leave more comments, and more interesting ones.

G'luck,

-PF

Thanks PF. This is my second scifi. I spent a lot of time on this one and would like to get it in the right place. The other was a shorty.

Considering the storyline, it would be difficult to remove the hetero scene. I'll just take the hits.

Anyway, it was good practice, being only the second hetero scene I have written. :rose:
 
Considering the storyline, it would be difficult to remove the hetero scene. I'll just take the hits.

Sorry, I wasn't too clear with my post was I? I meant to advise (as had already been noted in the thread) to avoid posting a story that inludes hetero sex in the lesbian category.

Seems like you're on the right track. :)

-PF
 
Sorry, I wasn't too clear with my post was I? I meant to advise (as had already been noted in the thread) to avoid posting a story that inludes hetero sex in the lesbian category.

Seems like you're on the right track. :)

-PF

Got it PF.

The story is getting some needed editing before I post. Things I missed despite my best effort! Who invented all those damn rules of grammar anyway? Shoot-fire, must've been a sadist. :D

Thanks all for the assistance. :rose:
 
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