Opinions on 2nd story-Anal attempt

[sexual improv]

Hey there,

Thanks to those that sent me messages about my first posting. Hopefully I've improved some things in this next posting. I have posted yet another story, called "Ass of Amy, My Cousin's Wife" that I'd like to get some feedback on.

http://literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=52486

Living's about making mistakes.
Dying's about wishing you'd made more.

 

[herpesface]

Brilliant

 

[pepsigirl165]

I really enjoyed reading your story Please write some more.