ozme52
The Wizard of Ahhhhhhhhhs
- Joined
- Sep 23, 2002
- Posts
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I apologize in advance, but if you think of me as the loving critic and take this as intended, everyone will become a better writer.
And I realize I'm no talent when it comes to writing, but I'm a VERY good reader. And I'm having trouble enjoying many of the SRP's
Proof read your work before you post. And get a dictionary. There's Meriam Webster Dictionary and Thesaurus
Why you ask?
I was promoted to principle.
s.b. principal
He towed the line.
to where did he tow it? s.b. toed
I wanted to be fare.
what are you? a taxi? s.b. fair
If scene, I'd be in trouble.
must be the third act. s.b. seen
I want to go to collage.
you need it. s.b. college
I want to of those.
s.b. two
You're to intense.
s.b. too
He was pacing back and fourth.
must have been pacing a square. s.b. forth
There home now.
s.b. They're
I'll post more of these goodies as I find them. No names, you know who you are and can fix 'em if you want.
And I realize I'm no talent when it comes to writing, but I'm a VERY good reader. And I'm having trouble enjoying many of the SRP's
Proof read your work before you post. And get a dictionary. There's Meriam Webster Dictionary and Thesaurus
Why you ask?
I was promoted to principle.
He towed the line.
I wanted to be fare.
If scene, I'd be in trouble.
I want to go to collage.
I want to of those.
You're to intense.
He was pacing back and fourth.
There home now.
I'll post more of these goodies as I find them. No names, you know who you are and can fix 'em if you want.