"One Last Wish"

[Moonlight_33]

Out of all the stories i have writen, never have i had the response that has come with the submission of "On Last Wish"
I would like to thank one and all for the emails and feed back i have recieved, you people are wonderful. Thank you.

 

[bluntforcemama]

Your timing is impeccable! I JUST read that story not five minutes ago, and I'm STILL bawling! It was the best romance story I've read in a long time. *sob* Thank you so much for sharing it with us! *sniffle*

 

[Katerina Val-Kyrie]

One Last Wish

I took it upon myself to share this link on behalf of a wonderful author. Moonlight_33, this story was very touching and incredibly written. The intimate moment shared between Kathy and Terry was beautifully done. Kathy lived her dream, her final and last wish. Unconditional love.

Well done.

The only critque I can share is, to watch those typo's. Well not glaring, they can effect the flow of the story. A good spellcheck program or editor usually catches them. Other than that, I felt your storyline was great. Your descriptives were beautiful and the passion shared between your characters was a wonderful read. A truly inspiring story.

Thanks for sharing.

Hugs Katerina

[Edited by Katerina Val-Kyrie on 03-23-2001 at 04:48 AM]

 

[CrystallineTears]

What a beautiful story. I'm still crying over it. Great job!

 

[CAT~~]

Whatever you do....don't stop writing! That was a beautiful story and I enjoyed it very, very much. I'll be looking for you name so I can read more of your wonderful stories.

As for the typos, skip the spell check and find someone to edit them. Spell check, as I have found, doesn't cut it when you spell the wrong words correctly.

Once again, it was a great story.

Cat~~

 

[Merelan]

Oh holy Mother of Goddess. You awful, wicked woman. How dare you let her die!!! I am bawling like a baby. Pass the tissues.

 

[nitengale]

Beautifully written.

 

[Whispersecret]

Ack. Don't spoil it for those of us who haven't read it, Merelan! Edit your post, please.