Once More Into the Breach

[estragon]

or, technical editor/adviser needed. I have started on A New Birth of Freedom Ch 2, possibly the least-awaited new release of this millennium, and have got through the animal waste with the help of Bronze and Ishtat, neither of whom apparently wants credit, though I cheerfully acknowledge their assistance.

Now comes the sperm donation. I need to know how it actually happens, from making the donation to delivering it to the recipient. I don't trust Wikipedia or any on-line site, because if I take material from there, someone who really knows will blast me for plagiarism in writing my term paper. So if any one has given, or received, or is a professional or otherwise has personal (I won't say "hands-on") knowledge, please contact me. You can certainly use an alt, or contact me via the feedback link on my author's page.

Usual terms for credit acknowledgment. Tech gets to see and review final draft. I get final approval, but if I reject any material part of a tech's recommendations, tech can have his/her name withdrawn as technical editor/adviser. In any event, no voting for or against the story, and no bad-mouthing by either party.

 

[Scotsman69]

You encourage nobody by misquoting Shakespeare.

'Once more UNTO the breach, dear friends, once more...'

Was that what you were looking for?

Sorry, couldn't resist. You're so pernickety with the writing of others.

 

[estragon]

Scot, Mea culpa. Now can anyone help?

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Scot, Mea culpa. Now can anyone help?

Sure, I'll help. Think Scot should be Scott.

That was easy, you're welcome.

 

[Scotsman69]

Scot is Scotsman. Scott was Sir Walter. Edinburgh is probably the only city in the world with its main railway station named after a novel. We're a literary lot here.

 

[estragon]

Scot is Scotsman. Scott was Sir Walter. Edinburgh is probably the only city in the world with its main railway station named after a novel. We're a literary lot here.

Quite right, Waverley is the station, named after the novel, for Edinburgh (Auld Reekie to those who love her, and, I hope, still home of Bamboo Garden, which is a great Chinese restaurant, and Cadenhead's whiskey shop).

Now, Asylum, what do you (or anyone else) know about sperm donation and assisted insemination? I've fudged it in my present draft, but I really want to do a better job.

 

[AsylumSeeker]

Quite right, Waverley is the station, named after the novel, for Edinburgh (Auld Reekie to those who love her, and, I hope, still home of Bamboo Garden, which is a great Chinese restaurant, and Cadenhead's whiskey shop).

Now, Asylum, what do you (or anyone else) know about sperm donation and assisted insemination? I've fudged it in my present draft, but I really want to do a better job.

I'm willing to donate, preferably orally or vaginally... if I can <sigh> So instead I write about it. Enough said?

 

[estragon]

As I had Lady Nadine remark in my story "A New Birth of Freedom Ch 1": "Fellatio and cunnilingus--you said a mouthful."