Once again more feedback!!!!

[rckplsky]

I have a new story up and a few old ones. And I'd like to get some feedback on Pegging Suite and my Boat Ho series. I don't care if it's positive or negative. I just want feedback. Hope to hear from you soon!

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=808525&page=submissions

 

[PacoFear]

Well, your writing has not changed a lick since Pegging Suite when I gave you feedback on that a little while back. You may be able to picture things in your head and operate a keyboard but I wouldn't call what you're doing writiing. My guess is that you just don't care that much about the way you blurt things out. I'm not sure why you expect anyone else to.