"On The Road" and "Lori's Little Secret"...To be continued

[Softly]

Both of these stories are well written, with interesting plots and characters. I will look forward to the "Rest of the Story!"

I will use these stories as an example of an area of concern that I have about some stories that are posted.

A submitted story should describe a complete event. The beginning, middle and end of "English 101." "To be continued," should be reserved for telling us about a new adventure of the characters, not the exciting part of the story we are reading.

In the instant cases, the Authors are excellent story tellers. Please continue to write for us.

 

[enjuedevi88]

re:On the Road

Hi! You didn't specify the authors names on your post. There are several stories entitled "On the Road" and I wrote one of them. Please specify. If you are talking about my story I'd like to hear your advice.

 

[Softly]

Hi Enjuedev88, I can't find the stories to determine if yours was the one I looked at.

My concern about the stories of this post was that they built up to the point of "Climax," and then ended with the "To be continued."

An example: " The tractor trailer was out of control, blowing his horn, speed increasing because of the steep grade. A school bus, full of students, was stopped sideways in the intersection and children lined the sidewalks on both side of the road."

"To be continued."

In the above stories,"Why?" Please finish.

 

[enjuedevi88]

Whew!

Nope, it wasn't mine. Thanks for taking the time to check! If you happen to run into one of my stories, your feedback is more than welcome!