On an Island In the sea, forever

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The Trans- Pacific Ship they were on sank to the bottom of the ocean.
They were the only 2 survivors. Finally swimming to a nearby deserted island, which was ripe with lush tropical fruits of all sorts, they 2 started talking. They had noticed each other on the late ship. Of all fate they had spoken to each other on the internet for a long time. And now they were together........ alone. He was a single man, living with friends. She was in a failing marriage. They knew they were meant together........fever.......
He reached around her neck and kissed her mouth and throat long and deep with his tongue.. she eagerly returned the favor..... his eager hands reached into what remained of her clothes... and removed them all, as she removed all of his. Adam and eve were reborn. He was standing at full attention for her. No man was more beautiful to her. She took him into her waiting wanting oral cavity while grabbing his firm posterior with her hand , and used her other hand to finger her womanliness to climax. He immediately released, as did she.......He repeatedly released. He took her by the back of her neck and pushed her head closer to his member so she could easily deep throat him.. his head touched her uvula then the very back of her throat, right there beneath the south pacific sun. they 2 released so frantically and this was just foreplay...then more to ...... come.. the soixte neuf with her on the top.. so he could slap her ass and cal her his slave and as they did and as he did.. she moaned with delight as they partook more and more..... then her waiting back door was ready and he slapped her huge beautiful ass, and she moaned.. O YES MASTER... then the penetration.. OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO YESSSSSSSSSS MMMMMMMMAAAASTTTTTEEER MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM Then the manly thrusts as she bucked against him wildly and frantically for 5 hours.......he reached around to her dripping snatch....as ocean waves of climax broke from them both they knew this was THE LIFE, unlike the one they had left behind.....but he wasn't through.. he did rear entry... she wanted another baby, one by him... (and it took).....9 months to the day later, although they lost track of time, they became parents, their new baby was named Seth. And the Island was named Eden. they found a cave. and they had children, and never did they ever wear clothes., neither they nor their children. They there lived happily ever after.
 
What the hell is that?

I don't see poetry. This is the Poetry Forum, is it not?

ourerotictails, are you lost?

Is there a method to your madness?
 
It aint me~


ourerotictails?
first post in poetry?



what the heck?

a short story in 'rough draft?'
 
ourerotictails said:
<snip> She took him into her waiting wanting oral cavity while grabbing his firm posterior with her hand , and used her other hand to finger her womanliness to climax. </snip>
I'm laughing right out loud! HAHAHAH
ourerotictails said:
<snip> his head touched her uvula then the very back of her throat, right there beneath the south pacific sun. they 2 released so frantically and this was just foreplay...then more to ...... come</snip>
His head!? OMG LOL.
ourerotictails said:
<snip>then her waiting back door was ready and he slapped her huge beautiful ass, <snip>Then the manly thrusts as she bucked against him wildly and frantically for 5 hours</snip>
The warning on the Viagra pack asks you to see a doctor if you have an erection for over 4 hours. This man's in danger baby... :catroar:
ourerotictails said:
<snip>left behind.....but he wasn't through.. he did rear entry... she wanted another baby, one by him... (and it took).....9 months to the day later</snip>
LOL! O Brave New World, though art a strange one, but I gotta tell ya, anal birth has to be painful.

This has just gotta be satire. I haven't laughed so hard in ages.
 
champagne1982 said:
I'm laughing right out loud! HAHAHAH His head!? OMG LOL. The warning on the Viagra pack asks you to see a doctor if you have an erection for over 4 hours. This man's in danger baby... :catroar: LOL! O Brave New World, though art a strange one, but I gotta tell ya, anal birth has to be painful.

This has just gotta be satire. I haven't laughed so hard in ages.

OMG!! I'm fallin over helpless! Totally! I saw the same thing and exploded. My kid absolutely hates adult 'stuff' of anykind, so much so that I catch hell for coming to this site on her computer. But I had to show her that about the baby. She has laughed for a couple hours and has an idea for a poem about

anal birth!!
by an anal retentive!
Who's just come to earth!!
Looking for a preventive!! (Her words, I promise!! and she's just getting started...)

This guy (has to be a guy, right, girls???) may have spawned a whole new trend!!

ohhhgoddddd I'm still guffawing!!!

TY, Champ! :rose:
 
two on an island

a pigeon pair, sunning
on white sand
and floating
on the sky-mirrored surface
reflecting memories
moments awash in minds
as the pacific licks the beach



thank you ourerotictails for the inspiration
:)
 
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