Older woman, younger man

[Biker_Faerie]

My idea for a story/RP is not original but I’m looking to see how to give it a twist.

My character is a fifty year old woman, happily married but things have frankly got very repetitive in her love life. Nothing unusual for couples that have been married for a while.

She’s meets a young man and they begin an affair with her husbands permission.

Where to go from here is the problem. A threesome with her husband is the obvious one, but what else ?

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

My idea for a story/RP is not original but I’m looking to see how to give it a twist.

My character is a fifty year old woman, happily married but things have frankly got very repetitive in her love life. Nothing unusual for couples that have been married for a while.

She’s meets a young man and they begin an affair with her husbands permission.

Where to go from here is the problem. A threesome with her husband is the obvious one, but what else ?

You have to give it some originality, is the answer. Most writers would indeed try to dream up some interesting twist... such as both husband and wife submitting to the young man's forceful personality and becoming his slaves... being obliged to groom their 30 yr old (married daughter) for his pleasure, maybe. Lots of possibilities... just a matter of using your imagination.

 

[sirhugs]

there are always tentacle monsters in need of a good home. But feed them well or they will eat all your plot bunnies.

 

[Magineer]

Yep, being beamed down by Captain Kirk and his motley crew of dragons, elves, Muddle-Earthers and other imagination-avoidance devices...

 

[Biker_Faerie]

This is all really helpful

Thanks

 

[gunhilltrain]

Yep, being beamed down by Captain Kirk and his motley crew of dragons, elves, Muddle-Earthers and other imagination-avoidance devices...

Let's go easy on the tentacle monsters and the Star Trek references. I have a series (actually sequels) where a young, part-time llmo driver is seduced by a kinky New York divorcee and then two of her friends. This is his meeting with the second one and the fourth one in the series. I think sirhugs read the first one of these.

Chastised By Mrs. Harris

What makes the older woman-younger man trope interesting (I hope) is the setting (all locations are accurate), the kinkiness involved, the role play and how she comes back to her true self afterwards, and the fact that she was introduced by her friend, who knows all about it but doesn't care anyway.

 

[HornyIsh69]

My idea for a story/RP is not original but I’m looking to see how to give it a twist.

My character is a fifty year old woman, happily married but things have frankly got very repetitive in her love life. Nothing unusual for couples that have been married for a while.

She’s meets a young man and they begin an affair with her husbands permission.

Where to go from here is the problem. A threesome with her husband is the obvious one, but what else ?

Also could be her trying to fool around more with the young man.

 

[sirhugs]

Let's go easy on the tentacle monsters and the Star Trek references. I have a series (actually sequels) where a young, part-time llmo driver is seduced by a kinky New York divorcee and then two of her friends. This is his meeting with the second one and the fourth one in the series. I think sirhugs read the first one of these.

Chastised By Mrs. Harris

What makes the older woman-younger man trope interesting (I hope) is the setting (all locations are accurate), the kinkiness involved, the role play and how she comes back to her true self afterwards, and the fact that she was introduced by her friend, who knows all about it but doesn't care anyway.

when did tentacle monsters ever go easy on us?

 

[Lucy_Lastic]

You have to give it some originality, is the answer. Most writers would indeed try to dream up some interesting twist... such as both husband and wife submitting to the young man's forceful personality and becoming his slaves... being obliged to groom their 30 yr old (married daughter) for his pleasure, maybe. Lots of possibilities... just a matter of using your imagination.

in other words use every cliché going.

 

[sirhugs]

in other words use every cliché going.

add a few new ones perhaps also?

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

in other words use every cliché going.

That's strictly your take. Being back-seat-driver cynical is the lazy person's megaphone here.

Different and original angles (for want of a better word) on plot developments are fantastically difficult to generate, since just about every possible sexual situation or permutation of situations has been done to death. What a writer can do however is to provide interest and originality through the detail of those angles. That's where the hard work (with which very few Lit. writers can be bothered) starts and, generally, the more of a hook you can build with the realism and quirkiness of that detail, the more convincing and successful your story will be.

 

[sirhugs]

That's strictly your take. Being back-seat-driver cynical is the lazy person's megaphone here.

Different and original angles (for want of a better word) on plot developments are fantastically difficult to generate, since just about every possible sexual situation or permutation of situations has been done to death. What a writer can do however is to provide interest and originality through the detail of those angles. That's where the hard work (with which very few Lit. writers can be bothered) starts and, generally, the more of a hook you can build with the realism and quirkiness of that detail, the more convincing and successful your story will be.

the miracles of modern medicine ...errr... writing...can revive the dead.

 

[gunhilltrain]

when did tentacle monsters ever go easy on us?

Wasn't that originally a Japanese trope? Not to be too hard on the Japanese, but some of their ideas have been quite, ah, interesting. Like the kamikazes. If one is running low on planes and pilots well, then, just crash the rest into ships. Partially effective, however. The American sailors who faced them found them terrifying.

 

[gunhilltrain]

You have to give it some originality, is the answer. Most writers would indeed try to dream up some interesting twist... such as both husband and wife submitting to the young man's forceful personality and becoming his slaves... being obliged to groom their 30 yr old (married daughter) for his pleasure, maybe. Lots of possibilities... just a matter of using your imagination.

Let's face it, everybody on this site promotes themselves, so I will too. The story I linked to, plus most of the others in that series, does put some new twists on old concepts. And it's relatively plausible, I think.

Another thing common on this site: people will describe in detail stories they have already posted. Always tempting to do that; I've done it too. However, try to just link to the story if one wishes, but let people figure it out for themselves.

 

[sirhugs]

someone- was it Northrup Frye? William Goldman? said there are only four original stories, all the others are just variations...

 

[Magineer]

someone- was it Northrup Frye? William Goldman? said there are only four original stories, all the others are just variations...

Whoever it was, shall we say that he/she was talking about extremely wide categories?!

Absolute 'originality' may be impossible but, as stated above, you can at least try to do the hard work of introducing interesting features to your plot and characters, such that the reader is engaged to the extent of wanting to 'turn the page'.

 

[Zootonius]

My idea for a story/RP is not original but I’m looking to see how to give it a twist.

My character is a fifty year old woman, happily married but things have frankly got very repetitive in her love life. Nothing unusual for couples that have been married for a while.

She’s meets a young man and they begin an affair with her husbands permission.

Where to go from here is the problem. A threesome with her husband is the obvious one, but what else ?

My suggestion, have the guy introduce her to his friends. Now hubby is confronted with a wife with a dozen lovers.

 

[sirhugs]

That's strictly your take. Being back-seat-driver cynical is the lazy person's megaphone here.

Different and original angles (for want of a better word) on plot developments are fantastically difficult to generate, since just about every possible sexual situation or permutation of situations has been done to death. What a writer can do however is to provide interest and originality through the detail of those angles. That's where the hard work (with which very few Lit. writers can be bothered) starts and, generally, the more of a hook you can build with the realism and quirkiness of that detail, the more convincing and successful your story will be.

Play nice. LD is anything but lazy- you can tell by how often he contributes, and his sometimes lengthy and usually thoughtful ideas.
It is better to disagree resprectfully than make personal rematks - if I recall from Philospophy 101 a thousand years ago, and hominem attacks are a logical fallacy. My prof said something about people using them to try to disguise an argument that lacked logic. It was an 8:30 class. Not sure I was awake at the time.
As carney and I (and sometimes others) try to instill atound here when things get tooo serious, there is a lot of room fun here, and we should not ge too serious, sometimes to the point of absurdities like tentacle monsters, but we always at least try to be respectful.

Life is absurd. If we take it tooo sriously, we will all die crying.

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

Play nice. LD is anything but lazy- you can tell by how often he contributes, and his sometimes lengthy and usually thoughtful ideas.
It is better to disagree resprectfully than make personal rematks - if I recall from Philospophy 101 a thousand years ago, and hominem attacks are a logical fallacy. My prof said something about people using them to try to disguise an argument that lacked logic. It was an 8:30 class. Not sure I was awake at the time.
As carney and I (and sometimes others) try to instill atound here when things get tooo serious, there is a lot of room fun here, and we should not ge too serious, sometimes to the point of absurdities like tentacle monsters, but we always at least try to be respectful.

Life is absurd. If we take it tooo sriously, we will all die crying.

Interesting... and confusing. I made that post over two weeks ago and you find it important to make these remarks now? You seem to find my post fascinating because this is the second time you've done so. My comment was on a post made by Lucy Lastic, not this 'LD' person.

There was nothing whatsoever personal in what I said - everything was kept at a strictly observational level.

You know: just a few minor thoughts.

In short, I don't know what you're on but don't come near me with it. If it will help you with your English, I've highlighted the main errors in your use of it.

By the way, life is not absurd... it's people who make it that way... and some more than others, as one might well observe...

 

[sirhugs]

Interesting... and confusing. I made that post over two weeks ago and you find it important to make these remarks now? You seem to find my post fascinating because this is the second time you've done so. My comment was on a post made by Lucy Lastic, not this 'LD' person.

There was nothing whatsoever personal in what I said - everything was kept at a strictly observational level.

You know: just a few minor thoughts.

In short, I don't know what you're on but don't come near me with it. If it will help you with your English, I've highlighted the main errors in your use of it.

By the way, life is not absurd... it's people who make it that way... and some more than others, as one might well observe...

Just play nice.
This is a fun forum full of polite people, with respect for one another for the most part.
we want to keep it that way, which is part of the reason I volunteered to be a moderator.

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

Just play nice.
This is a fun forum full of polite people, with respect for one another for the most part.
we want to keep it that way, which is part of the reason I volunteered to be a moderator.

I always do... and I have done so on this thread... which is why your comment was incorrect and, frankly, odd in the extreme.