Older Lady Discovers A Young Man...Welcome Feedback

[Limbhugger]

Hi all,

I have submitted two chapters of what I hope will become a recurring visit to two characters that I really enjoy; Catherine and Evan.

Catherine is a late 40's divorcee (sp?) that seeks release from a young lawn boy named Evan. But, as hopefully my stories will convey, there is a lot more going on than just sex. I hope to make these visits an exploration of two people exploring and finding answers to questions often not yet asked.

Anyway, readers, time and my skills (or lack there of...lol) will determine that.

I would really appreciate constructive criticism of the submissions. I know there are some typos and grammtical errors but hopefull they aren't too distracting. I am seriously considering the use of an editor for future submissions.

The stories are titled Coming Of Age. I have a couple others submitted that were really "thoughts to paper" that I should have cleaned up before posting. But feedback welcome on them as well.

You can get to the stories from the link in my signature. Look forward to hearing from you, here or by PM or email.

LH

 

[Chicklet]

Congrats on your "H"'s, you deserve them. As for editing, there are a few minor spelling and grammar errors, as you mentioned, but nothing overly distracting.

An editor can be a great thing, someone to check through your work and keep you from getting a big head. I don't think that it would take much to perfect your stories, so if you have a chance, grab it.

Chicklet

 

[Limbhugger]

Wow, thanks Chicklet. I have no idea how the "H's" are awarded but sure was happy when I saw them by the stories!

I would like to find an editor to do just what you said. Just nervous about finding a good editor that doesn't want to re-write my story. Probably a silly thing to worry about.

Thanks again for the kind words!!!