Old stories, new ideas?

[Belilica]

I've been writing pretty much all my life. I've been writing erotica for only a few short years, and have contributed here for 2 of them. I'd like some opinions on the stories and poems I've posted already and hope to get some feedback about things I can do differently next time.

Thanks in advance!

*Edited to add* The link for my memberpage is in my sig line... just in case