Okay purvs, help me out

[the captians wench]

so I've got this girl shackled to the wall in a midival dungon about to get some very hot time on the rack....my problem is, I can't think of why she's there, I mean why she's in the dungon in the first place...and me being the ocd person I am, I have to have a reason for it. She can't just magically apear in this place for the dude to torture and fuck as he pleases, my smut needs just a tad more plot than that.

so any ideas?

 

[HottieMama]

Is the dungeon part of a home? Is she the maid? Nanny? Just turned 18 babysitter?

A curious nosy neighbor??

 

[catalina_francisco]

Any reason why you can't introduce the reason later? I have done that before and was told it added another layer without the readers even realising there originally was no reason and it came to me and was added later on as the story progressed.

Catalina

 

[the captians wench]

Any reason why you can't introduce the reason later? I have done that before and was told it added another layer without the readers even realising there originally was no reason and it came to me and was added later on as the story progressed.

Catalina

Oh that's brilliant cat!

thankies

 

[the captians wench]

Is the dungeon part of a home? Is she the maid? Nanny? Just turned 18 babysitter?

A curious nosy neighbor??

Think 12th centry hun. I'm thinking she should be noblility...perhaps a captured lady or some well to do like that

 

[HottieMama]

Think 12th centry hun. I'm thinking she should be noblility...perhaps a captured lady or some well to do like that

Sorry wench...

 

[the captians wench]

Sorry wench...

nothing to be sorry for sweetie. I'm just out seeking ideas where ever they spring up.

 

[catalina_francisco]

What I really want to know is when are you going to invite us all to this dungeon of yours (costumes provided by you too of course) so we can have a Lit BDSM get together to rival all get togethers?!!

Catalina

 

[@}-}rebecca----]

good morning all, oh my .........

Miss Wench sweety the answer is obvious .......

She was down there ( in the dungeon ) looking for the Marquis deSade's contact lense.

No need to thank me

 

[the captians wench]

What I really want to know is when are you going to invite us all to this dungeon of yours (costumes provided by you too of course) so we can have a Lit BDSM get together to rival all get togethers?!!

Catalina

I have some vacation time coming up.

 

[the captians wench]

Miss Wench sweety the answer is obvious .......

She was down there ( in the dungeon ) looking for the Marquis deSade's contact lense.

No need to thank me

of course!..I guess I just couldn't see it.

 

[catalina_francisco]

I have some vacation time coming up.

LOL, well see!! Now what was said dungeon's address?

Catalina

 

[the captians wench]

LOL, well see!! Now what was said dungeon's address?

Catalina

*giggles*

 

[Luvkitty33]

Any reason why you can't introduce the reason later? I have done that before and was told it added another layer without the readers even realising there originally was no reason and it came to me and was added later on as the story progressed.

Catalina

Actually, I think this is a really good idea. I personally enjoy stories that have the "onion effect."....where as you read, the author is slowly peeling back the layers. I think doing the story the way Catalina suggested by adding in the reason later can make the story more exciting.

I look forward to reading your story, CW!!!

 

[the captians wench]

Actually, I think this is a really good idea. I personally enjoy stories that have the "onion effect."....where as you read, the author is slowly peeling back the layers. I think doing the story the way Catalina suggested by adding in the reason later can make the story more exciting.

I look forward to reading your story, CW!!!

don't know if this one will be postable yet...it sure is not coming easy

 

[HB1965]

I rather like the nosey neighbor idea. She could be a nosey tentant's daughter who got curious about the screaming and moaning she heard.

 

[myinnerslut]

don't know if this one will be postable yet...it sure is not coming easy

just write it becuase you enjoy it. if you want to post it later, you can, but no pressure frm the posting world.

and she could be a spoiled lady who pushed one too many peoples buttons

 

[Chicklet]

Think 12th centry hun. I'm thinking she should be noblility...perhaps a captured lady or some well to do like that

She's going to inherit a title and the evil antagonist wants her to marry him so that he will get the title and her inheritance, and she's protesting so he keeps her in the dungeon and tortures her until she agrees. And along the way, she and he both discover that they *like* the torture.

 

[HB1965]

She's going to inherit a title and the evil antagonist wants her to marry him so that he will get the title and her inheritance, and she's protesting so he keeps her in the dungeon and tortures her until she agrees. And along the way, she and he both discover that they *like* the torture.

Good job! I like that too.

 

[the captians wench]

She's going to inherit a title and the evil antagonist wants her to marry him so that he will get the title and her inheritance, and she's protesting so he keeps her in the dungeon and tortures her until she agrees. And along the way, she and he both discover that they *like* the torture.

oooh....I like it!

 

[Chicklet]

oooh....I like it!

excellent.

you probably have a whole forum of editors here waiting to help you out, as well.

 

[HB1965]

excellent.

you probably have a whole forum of editors here waiting to help you out, as well.

Oh yes I would be more than happy to read through the rough draft.


*Goes in search of vibrator and a comfy place to...um... read*

 

[the captians wench]

Oh yes I would be more than happy to read through the rough draft.


*Goes in search of vibrator and a comfy place to...um... read*

well the lappy crashed and me being a moron was writing it in an email insted of a word processor so I lost it. back to the begining.

 

[Chicklet]

consider it a second draft

 

[the captians wench]

consider it a second draft

you're full of brilliant ideas tonight.