Ohh Doctor Ch. 3 by male-man

[Fantasies-only]

Ohh Doctor Ch. 3 by male_man

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This is the story of a doctor/patient exam that got way too personal, with frequent hand jobs leading up to nude posing.
Although it doesn't have the conventional sexual edge most of these stories have, I think the building of this relationship upon sensual flirtations is much better, making the reader use more imagination than straight out story telling.

This is in this forum because the third chapter isn't written yet.
Can anyone help me think of ideas for male_man for a third chapter, maybe he can paint her next.
Also, we've had a penile hand job "exam", but what about breast (female) fondling?
There was a female patient mentioned in this, what if somehow it turned into girl/girl sex and you're a voyeur?
What if you were asked to go to the doctor's home with her again and this woman, and perform breast messages on both of them, then the doctor's roommate (also woman) can give you a second opinion on your penis exam.

http://www.literotica.com:81/storie...Ohh+Doctor"&author=&Submit=Search+The+Stories

 

[hyulhyulhyul]

Wonderful story

I'm wondering what took you so long to get around to writing chapter three. Not that it matters anymore , at least as far as the monthly contests are concerned, but I voted a Five for each of your chapters.

Your idea about involving the young female patient in the scenario may be practical in the long term, but in the short term, it might be a complicated thing to pull off in such short chapters. What I would like to suggest is maybe having a female friend of the doctor pop by unexpectedly and find her in her studio with your naked perv.

Things might develope more realistically from this approach, and you might be able to work in the young female patient and other characters as the story gradually unfolds. This story has the potential to be quite long if you have the time to devote to it.

If you really want to have the Young female patient involved right away, you might have the doctor ask her if she would be interested in posing for her too, and have your perv and the female patient pose together in the nude.

 

[Fantasies-only]

Actually, I'm not the person who wrote it.
This post is here because chapter 3 has not been writen yet.
I think your way is better as a gradual build up.
She (the doctor) could have a roommate that supplies the paint (body paint can be worked in for a shower scene) for her hobby.
Maybe she left the doctor accidentally took these paints to the office, and her roommate comes to the hospital to get them.
Sexual situations with both girls ensue.

 

[hyulhyulhyul]

Lots of interesting possibilities

Actually, I'm not the person who wrote it.
This post is here because chapter 2 has not been writen yet.
I think your way is better as a gradual build up.
She (the doctor) could have a roommate that supplies the paint (body paint can be worked in for a shower scene) for her hobby.
Maybe she left the doctor accidentally took these paints to the office, and her roommate comes to the hospital to get them.
Sexual situations with both girls ensue.

This story line lends itself to going in so many directions.

Just curious, are you acting on behalf of the author, or generously acting on your own trying to pump some new life into a story that started so well and didn't progress any further?

 

[Fantasies-only]

This story line lends itself to going in so many directions.

Just curious, are you acting on behalf of the author, or generously acting on your own trying to pump some new life into a story that started so well and didn't progress any further?

First of all, I meant chapter 3 hasn't been written, not chapter 2.

No, I'm posting this on my own, asking for ideas I can give to him.
I would really love to see this go further.
I think this is the best sexual story on Literotica so far, simply because it's not really sex, but more like a constant flirtation of sexual innuendo.
The fact this relationship builds in several short chapters rather than 1 big one, seems much better, as it leaves the reader wanting more, like the storyline in a TV soap.

 

[Fantasies-only]

Hey, both stories were written in 2003!
http://www.literotica.com:81/storie...Ohh+Doctor"&author=&Submit=Search+The+Stories
Is this male_man still around?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Does male_man even want to write a 3rd chapter?

 

[bisexplicit]

Does male_man even want to write a 3rd chapter?

And does he want suggestions?

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Yes. This thread is very presumptuous of Mr. Fantasies.

 

[Fantasies-only]

Yes. This thread is very presumptuous of Mr. Fantasies.

Sorry, just trying to help out.
This is the best story on Lit I've read so far because of the unsexual build up, and it would be a shame to stop at this point.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Have you sent feedback to the author? Writing a "story idea" on someone else's stories isn't the way to go.

 

[Fantasies-only]

Have you sent feedback to the author? Writing a "story idea" on someone else's stories isn't the way to go.

Good idea, I think I'll do that, if he's still around.