Oh... the pain of it all

KillerMuffin

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I wrote a poem about it.

*ahem*

My dearest cym
Who, on a whim
Got all pissed off
About Angel... no that's not right.

*erasing last line about Angel*

Got all pissed off
Though I didn't boff
My old flame
Angel's her name
Now my heart
Just won't start
Cause my dearest, darling, wonderfullest beloved cym
Doesn't love me anymore... needs something here

*scratches head*

Cause my dearest, darling, wonderfullest beloved cym
Doesn't love me anymore though my love brims... no *erases*
Cause my dearest, darling, wonderfullest beloved cym
Doesn't love me anymore though I love cym... no *erases*
Cause my dearest, darling, wonderfullest beloved cym
Doesn't love me anymore I feel so grim
Now she's got Never
Who's so clever
To take advantage of my cherished, hurting sweetie
If she touches cym, on her head I'm gonna beatie
Cause cym's my ONLY beloved sweetie

*sniffles* It's from my heart.
 
Ohhh.. Damn, a poet and a soldier. What chance have I got?

I write this rhyme to remind myself to not fall in love with anybody else,
On the board, in the chats, or even online .
No, I wont fall for a pretty face this time.
No more Killer or cymbidia or Angel as well,
For they've all had me under their spell
And broken my hearts, all three of the tarts,
But I can't on my sadness dwell
I'll just move on, with a happy song,
In my heart and veins, though all that remains
Is the memory of three that never loved me
Though I long for them, just the same.
 
Wow, that was really good, too!

I think it would be better if you used more rhymes, though. KM's sweetie/beatie/sweetie finish was da bomb.
 
GODDAMIT!

Okay....

CUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Cut, damn it, CUT!


Let's break for brunch, people.
We've got reservations at Chez Peyo.
Load up the limos.
http://www.sterba.com/chezpeyo/brunch/

We're gonna start shooting again this evening, do you hear me, and i want you all to know your lines!




(Cym's note: Heh. This is where i'll be for the next while. See all y'all later. );)
 
Well Harbinger, all of my lines rhymed, so I'm not certain how to add more rhyming. Personally, I think that it's pretty good for a poem that took me two minutes to write but - that's life.


Now Mistress says she loves me, could it possibly be true?
I have for long loved her from afar though I think she never knew
That I lived for her smile, for the warmth in her eyes,
Could she have felt the same? Or did she finally realize,
That this poor, lonely poet thought the world of she,
And Mistress only says 'I love you.' because of the other three
That scorned me and mocked me. Or could it be true
That she has longed for me from afar?
And that I never knew?
 
No, it was outstanding! On second reading the line:

"Is the memory of three that never loved me"
is especially poignant, given that it can be read two ways. Is it "the memory of three 'that Never loved me'" Or are you saying you remember three who never loved you? Don't tell me, I cherish the uncertainty.

But all is not lost, you can wait 30 min and page cym at the restaurant. That's an end run KM will Never expect!
 
*howling disconsolately and tearing up the poem into little bits*

She never loved me!!!

cymbidia!!!!!!

*wails*

I have to call Lavy and get Siren. I need legal representation. She was just using me for my off shore accounts.

*sniffles*
 
Damn these are the times i hate being poeticly challenged.
 
Technically, my darling, a Swiss bank account is most definitely on shore, wouldn't you agree?

I love my Muffie
She's a tuffie
And she cuddles so warmly, it's true.
I don't want to go
But my heart's hollow
Cuz she loves sweet Angel, not me.

My attorney, SS, has been in touch with you, has she not?
~sigh~ Oh my love! I wish it could have been different for us!
 
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