occ/casting call: there are no traittors, just enemys.

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this in my first time making a thread, so have some patience with me. this thread is partly modeled after the mange series rose hip zero.

is this thread there is a training school for training super agents. adopted as children, both men and women are trained to acheive super human stamina, streanth, speed, and other skills.
this started as a way to get a private army for the mafia (for now). the point of the thread is for some of the soldiers to betray there comrads, and be slaughtered without mercy.
if there is someone who you would like to kill cause their annoying, feel free to wreak havok here. missions will also be assigned. and you will be given a rank on preformance. i will add more detail later, and this is open to some sex as well. i would appreciate some ideas to make it more solid. the climate around the school is gentle, but if you go to far then all you find is wasteland.

a bio would look like this.
name: jo kito
age: 18
body discription- at 5 foot 6, he has short orange hair, hazel eyes, wears a light raincoat, and brown shorts.
skill: use two silenced pistols and a 4 foot blade.


weponds can be anything from none to a rocket launcher.
history: was taken from a faimly of hunters while little. he was raised at the achademy to be stealthy and silent.
personality: a bit cocky, but he is well trained. he gets into trouble but is loyal. tries to complete missions with some creativity.

the power of these guys is they can jump about 15 feet, the stronger ones 20 feet, they can lift 50libs while runnung 5 miles for 2 hours(it is quite tiring), and they can punch a brick wall, but might only dent it with one puch. with 3 they could break though.
the stealth trained ones can sneak up on a cat without it noticing. they have exelent musle control so they dont make a sound. (you can see why the mafia dont want these guys to escape).
i will add more as i think of it.
there will also be a resistence movement(im not gonna pressure everyone to betray each other).
for now post a bio or some ideas and ill take a look. i will edit this post as i improve on it. this is in the modern world.
 
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Well bio's typicaly have a history section too. As for as first thread ideas go this isn't to bad but yeah you need to flesh it out.

First off we are in the modern world I assume.

Well for this private army I would recamend making some sort of company or mob boss type organization to host it. After that a basic idea for the envoirment would be next thing. Are we in a cold snowy place, a city like LA, or out in the middle of a desert.

My next bit of advice is a sort of power scale, for clearity. Are we talking punching threw brick walls, lefting 800lbs, or each person can life 1.5 times there body weight easily. Same for speed and endurance, six miles in an hour with out breathing hard or four miles in the same time. (Note I used to be able to travel four miles with a 50lbs back pack in about one and half hours.)


I was considering making a black ops / X-com: UFO defense thread similar to this except with aliens and mecha. So if you want to go that route I am all for it.
 
as long as we can still have superpowered whatever with basic human emotions, i would be thrilled to merge out stories.
 
so how about a black opp or whatever specialy trained team prepared for aliens that never saw any action until one day.... a radiactive blast crashed down and stayed put without leaving. the shields keep whoever is inside them safe, and were the shields end is mostly visable, but at some spots you cant totaly tell. an agent acedentilly steps outside the shield, and is mutated into an alien. meanwhile the other non-mutated aliens arive. i think mutated agents should be stronger then regular aliens. we can call them m-aliens. i ight find a place for the mechas. first i want to hear from u
 
Aprently I missed your first reply. I admire your eagerness

Well if your runing the thread do what ever you like. Their is no need to include aliens if its not your thing.

Your current story if you make it less sudden would probably be fine. Maybe replace the radition with a mind control ray or a gene enhancer, or something else like nanobots.

As an alternative perhaps we could combine the two difrently, say they were raised as a private army and very well trained, but the owner is insane and has trained them to fight aliens which do not exist. Then a few agents board and high on personal power go rouge and a group is sent to stop them. Or perhaps this insane patron thinks every one in a town in say tenesee has been replaced by an alien. No one believes him but the team goes any ways and then breaks into two groups, one trying to protect the 100 or so people of the town and the other group trying to kill the people.
 
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i like your last idea. ill try to work on it and improve on it. i apreciate your help on this post. its a first for me. if we can get it working and some players, i think it could be a hit. i hope you can help me make it succesfull. i think that an insane group that has breeded these soldiers(a bit more then one man can do alone) could order them to attack all non belivers of their realigion. im not sure what realigion that would be, but we(or i, if ur not around) will think of something. they will disturb the aliens who have infiltrated our society, and start a war bettween the aliens, the soldiers, and the military.(the military wont just stand by and watch) some of the soldiers will take the side of the military, and maybe the aliens. thus the war is in motion.
 
Well if you need help on lit feel free to PM me. I'm on fairly often and should be able to answer most questions.
 
i think they will worship earth as a planet. they will consider it the origen of themselves, and they will say humans are destroying it. the orginization will be a special species of humans with super abilitys. (hence why they train people to be like them)

the aliens are a threat to them cause they think the aliens want to destroy the planet.

all the aliens want to do is stop the human race from destroying their solar system. if that means destoying all humans, so be it.

the military sees aliens attacking and super humans attacking. they shoot back.

so anyone who wants to play im open to suggustion, but iv preety much finilized this. i could help you make a thread with an idea you give me or i could launch it myself. so please someone come here and post a bio or ofer some suggustion or tell me if your intrested at all. or just say hello. :)
 
i think im gonna post ic, then if nobody shows up this thread is dead until someone pm's me.
 
ic: jo was furious. after leaving a special ritual of the masters design, he had run into a praying human. he imediatly killed it, and said an apology to the masters for such blesemy done while he was near. he decided right then and there that he would kill all the humands he could find. he went back to headquarters and asked the others who would join him.
 
ooc: i know its not much but i wasnt sure how to start. hopefully other people will come and respond to my charecters call. if not, then ill just leave this thread alone.
 
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