Nymphomaniac story Help

[BlackSnake]

Some may call her a slut or whore, but after being with her you would call her a love goddess.

It would be something in the way that she walked, the sparkle in her eye, the brightness of her smile, and the obvious shape of her incredible body.

The sound on her heels on marble, stone, or tile echos like holves. Every man and woman turn with curiousity.

Even women are drawn to her with lustful thoughts. Her ora is sex. Hot steaming sex. Raw passionate sex. She is the embodiment of sex.

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Help!

I'm working on the description of the nymphomaniac goddess story. Please lean a hand if you can. I'm trying to write a very good introduction.

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Her golden mane bounced atop her sculptured shoulder, flowing in the gentle breeze of her passing. The aroma is light, but strongly intoxicating.

 

[sirhugs]

I am of the 'less is more' school. Jump right into action or dialogue to hook the reader, and then back off to scene set.

 

[BlackSnake]

I am of the 'less is more' school. Jump right into action or dialogue to hook the reader, and then back off to scene set.

I know everyone want the action and if any substance mixed in the details.

The story will be written in the first person. Someone very close to them main character.

I want the POV at the point of jerking off at the very thought of the main character.

 

[cherrylips_au]

At the sound of her heels clicking across the floor I knew I was in trouble. I couldn't resist I am just a mere man and she is a goddess. I knew if I turned to watch her I would be lost to her forever. One glance by man or woman was enough to be caught by her breathtaking looks. She oozed sexuality. Raw passionate sex.


Is this something like how you wanted to start it ?

 

[BlackSnake]

At the sound of her heels clicking across the floor I knew I was in trouble. I couldn't resist I am just a mere man and she is a goddess. I knew if I turned to watch her I would be lost to her forever. One glance by man or woman was enough to be caught by her breathtaking looks. She oozed sexuality. Raw passionate sex.


Is this something like how you wanted to start it ?

Yup!

Damn, I can't write like that. Strong and intense. The words that you feel when you read.

 

[trigger9]

I knew that trouble had arrived, perhaps it was the sound of her heels clicking across the tile floor. It could be the way she carried herself or that arrogant flip of her hair that let me know she was a goddess and I was not worthy...

 

[cherrylips_au]

Yup!

Damn, I can't write like that. Strong and intense. The words that you feel when you read.

Thanks Black Snake I just changed your own words around a little.
You said you wanted to get into the action fairly quickly then go back and then fill in, I thought that opening gave you that option.

I hope you do write the story I think it's a great idea you have.

 

[BlackSnake]

Since I'm not a woman, it's going to be difficult to protect realistic thoughts from this character.

She knows both men and women are checking her out, which turns her on. She knows that her movements are seductive. She want them to be. She want me and women to make a move on her. She want to fuck them all.

 

[cherrylips_au]

See I misunderstood and thought you were writing from the guys point of view after meeting this godess and telling why she had such an impact on him.

I have been thinking alot about this idea and if you want some help I would be happy to volunteer.

 

[BlackSnake]

See I misunderstood and thought you were writing from the guys point of view after meeting this godess and telling why she had such an impact on him.

I have been thinking alot about this idea and if you want some help I would be happy to volunteer.

Thank you, I accept your offer. PM me.

 

[Diane Marie]

I’m not really keen on the idea of her being a nymphomaniac, this would imply an addiction to sex. Being addicted gives her very little choice.

Make her wanton, she’s chosen this course, she wants sex not because of any addiction, she just loves having sex.

 

[BlackSnake]

I’m not really keen on the idea of her being a nymphomaniac, this would imply an addiction to sex. Being addicted gives her very little choice.

Make her wanton, she’s chosen this course, she wants sex not because of any addiction, she just loves having sex.

I like the idea of an addiction, she can help herself. After every orgasm she is thrusting for another, like a vamp for blood.

Her seductiveness, draws her prey.

I love it.