LupusDei
curious alien
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No, this is NOT about phone sex. And yes, it's basically a random scene that may or not be central to the story.
She's completely nude. Likely standing, maybe walking. Sitting, lying down isn't nearly as fun. Possibly she's being naughty and is nude where she shouldn't be, but it could as well be (or start at) someplace completely normal and mundane (to her), like on a nude beach or in a gym or pool locker rooms or similar.
Whomever she talks with likely has no idea about her exact whereabouts and state of undress. May or not care, but likely would be shocked or at least mildly amused if knew. They talk at length, lively, engaged, but it's effectively irrelevant why and about what.
The girl may have fun by remembering it periodically, or completely forgot about her nudity outright. She's not shy about, nor embarrassed with her nudity, not at the moment, at least. Her limited inability to terminate the conversation and dress, in conjunction with her disrupted awareness may lead to unforeseen consequences. She may wander from safe environment to (more) public without realizing, for example. People around her may come and go, like her group leave and another enter the pool showers.
It's probably a viewpoint external to her, as the sexual excitement is to observe her in this situation, but I wouldn't rule out first person completely, if she's self-reflective enough, or alternatively, it could provide for a nice surprise moment if reader is allowed to forget she never dressed along with herself.
She's completely nude. Likely standing, maybe walking. Sitting, lying down isn't nearly as fun. Possibly she's being naughty and is nude where she shouldn't be, but it could as well be (or start at) someplace completely normal and mundane (to her), like on a nude beach or in a gym or pool locker rooms or similar.
Whomever she talks with likely has no idea about her exact whereabouts and state of undress. May or not care, but likely would be shocked or at least mildly amused if knew. They talk at length, lively, engaged, but it's effectively irrelevant why and about what.
The girl may have fun by remembering it periodically, or completely forgot about her nudity outright. She's not shy about, nor embarrassed with her nudity, not at the moment, at least. Her limited inability to terminate the conversation and dress, in conjunction with her disrupted awareness may lead to unforeseen consequences. She may wander from safe environment to (more) public without realizing, for example. People around her may come and go, like her group leave and another enter the pool showers.
It's probably a viewpoint external to her, as the sexual excitement is to observe her in this situation, but I wouldn't rule out first person completely, if she's self-reflective enough, or alternatively, it could provide for a nice surprise moment if reader is allowed to forget she never dressed along with herself.
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