Nothing Small about this Appliance Repair

sirhugs

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All the hubbies in town wonder how Max's Small Appliance Repair stays in business- with low prices, why don't their wives just replace the broken can openers and sticky toasters?


Well, Max's secret started the day he didn't know which toaster belonged to Mrs. smith and she had to step into his cramped work space to identify hers. Brushing up against his apron, she discovered that Max was far from small. Soon she told the whole bridge club.

Twenty years later, Max still makes a nice living off tips from the second generation of housewives that need his talents.
 
I like this idea a lot. what would you like to see come of this idea? would you like a simple story or a series? Tell me more about Max or the housewives. Or is this the entire idea and you would like to see what someone can make of it? If you would like I could make a ton of fun from this idea of yours.
 
I like this idea a lot. what would you like to see come of this idea? would you like a simple story or a series? Tell me more about Max or the housewives. Or is this the entire idea and you would like to see what someone can make of it? If you would like I could make a ton of fun from this idea of yours.

this is pretty much it. I was making toast this morning & reflecting upon our disposable society.

I do suspect this needs to be more than a short stroker, because it needs to involve several women. Do the mothers know their recently married daughters are also succumbing?

would love to see what you make of it. It needs someone with a nice light touch I think, but who can capture some essential; core sadness, wrapped around hot sex, in a series or long story.

The core sadness is that Max loves his ladies just as much as he loves fixing classic appliances, yet he can never fully have them, can never, in spite of his endowment, find happiness, which is just as fragile as the items he fixes.

I see Max as short, solid but not fat, wearing a checked shirt with the cuffs rolled up. He wears glasses, has a tonsure of reddish hair, a bushy moustache, glasses- just the sort of guy no husband suspects of cuckolding them.
 
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I'll see what I can throw together for you. I'll make it into a series and probably do it from 3rd person. I'll use the business name as the title to the stories. I hope I can get 5-10 good stories out of them. It will take me a short while to get the first one going and feel free to leave a comment or message me about what you think about it.
 
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