not the usual feedback

[justgem]

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[Guest]

gem,

Your story has an h because it is HOT! It flows well, your descriptions are good, and the premise is fantasy spelled out. There are a couple of typos but they didnt glare out enough to interupt the story.

I read a couple of your early ones too and can see where your writing has improved.

Keep up the good work.

 

[Justin_Thyme]

Feedback issues

justgem, I, too, thought people no longer cared for my stories enough to send feedback. Then I changed my profile Email addy. Have only written one story with the new Email but have already received more messages than the last several stories combined!
I too believe the Lit mailbox has a serious fault.
JT

 

[Couture]

The lit email addy was horrible. It lost messages both from and to and caused countless porn spam messages to be sent to my other addy.

My advice would be to switch over to hotmail or yahoo.

 

[justgem]

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