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Good for you, that's some strong emotion you're bringing out.

And to think, this morning you were all worried about this story not doing well.;)
 
I haven't read your story, but wanted to say good for you. When you hit those buttons, it can be a real shock to the system, but a good one. I had a couple of stories that got similar reactions, and I was surprised but flattered that these readers told me their stories. I hadn't thought I would hit those spots with people, and it made me realize how lucky I am in many respects.

So good for you. *hug*
 
NightyKnight said:
LC, if you were within arms reach, I'd have you in a BIG bear hug right now! You are ALWAYS here when I need you!:heart:

The trolls are hitting me pretty hard (from a 5.0 several hours ago down to a 4.8 now) but I don't even care anymore. What is getting me now is all the people who are either Vets themselves, or know one, and say that this story is somehow helpful (badly needed healing or understanding, etc.) and needed! I can't believe the number of Vets emailing me from as far back as Viet Nam (before I was even born.)

I hate to just a comment at the end of my story like any other reader - the comments are coming so fast it would get buried fast - but an edit or another submission would take too long to get posted too. Are there any other ways to "sticky" a note for the readers? Do you have any suggestions? I really want to let my readers know I'm grateful for their sacrifice and that I'm so happy that this story is helping heal the hurt. :rose:
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Short of an edit, the only thing I can think of is a note on your home page.

Also its not against the rules to post a comment on your story thanking people for their service.
 
THIS WILL BE HARSH.


As a combat vet the story fails to resonate with my experiences in Vietnam. Its like a virgin's idea of what sex is like. The story is a WTF mystery to me. And the grammar is awful.

Real combat is a horrific blend of confusion, fear, anger, tears, impotence in the face of overwhelming demand for effective action, and the burden of it all sits upon you like a dead horse you must pull with you every inch of the way. Your brain screams RUN FOOL! But youre chained to the dead horse. You and the horse aint going anyplace.
 
You've got to love it when you post a story and get like thirty comments in just a few days. I've only had it happen twice but it puts a warm glow in the heart to be sure.

Congrats, On it and I will read it and add you another comment probably latter today. Right now the wife is sending me out for donuts.

To toot my own horn a bit, here are the two I posted that did that.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-car-wont-crank

http://www.literotica.com/s/southern-heritage
 
MSTarot said:
You've got to love it when you post a story and get like thirty comments in just a few days. I've only had it happen twice but it puts a warm glow in the heart to be sure.

Congrats, On it and I will read it and add you another comment probably latter today. Right now the wife is sending me out for donuts.

To toot my own horn a bit, here are the two I posted that did that.

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-car-wont-crank

http://www.literotica.com/s/southern-heritage
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*****
 
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I see you're atop the Romance Hall of Fame. Kudos for that. Romance is one of the more rewarding categories to write for. The crowd there appreciate the effort you put in (particularly the build-up and non-erotic parts of a story).

I've bookmarked it on my tab. I'll give it a read tomorrow if I get a chance.
 
NightyKnight said:
First, JBJ, thank you for your service and sacrifice for the benefit of our country! It is truly a dark spot in our history that we have never atoned for our sins in the way we treated our returning vets from Viet Nam, my father having been one of them.

Second, I'm sorry you did not like the story. It is true that I personally have never been in combat (or the military) and have no idea what it is actually like, but I have other experiences of loss and grief and guilt. No one's story is going to be a one-size-fits-all. I set out only to write what I thought would be a tender romance story, but it has become something much more on its own, judging from the feedback. If it somehow helps even just one person to heal, or to understand what someone they love has been through, than I have accomplished much more than I set out to do.

Again, I thank you sir! :heart:
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No I didn't like the story, it comes across as bullshit that will appeal to other frauds.
 
NightyKnight said:
I'm very sorry you feel that way. It was never my intention to hurt you or anyone else who has been there.

Nonetheless, can we still be friends? :rose:
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Dear, You didn't hurt me, but your story is nonsense that depicts nonsense. The disclaimer needs to be made.

I recall when my son was on his way to Kuwait, my wife got all excited cuz he didn't seek her counsel about war. he asked me. I looked at her and said, WHAT EXACTLY ARE YOU GONNA SAY TO HIM?
 
PennLady said:
I haven't read your story, but wanted to say good for you. When you hit those buttons, it can be a real shock to the system, but a good one. I had a couple of stories that got similar reactions, and I was surprised but flattered that these readers told me their stories. I hadn't thought I would hit those spots with people, and it made me realize how lucky I am in many respects.

So good for you. *hug*
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I think you may find it worth while. It's very "different".
 
As I've said elsewhere, there aren't a lot of hobbies where making strangers cry is considered a good thing :)
 
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