Not erotica... But still a story. (Basic Outline)

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FYI I write, but i write slowly. I am working on a massive novel project... but it takes me months to write one chapter... I have written the prolouge and epilouge for the first book (25 chapters) and there will be a sequal of equal length. The reason for a must have sequal is that the first book leaves off at a huge cliff hanger. it can be classifyed as a vampire tragety... Tragety as in no happy ending. :)

I give you the outline for The Wanderers and some information on the sequal: The Wanderers 2: Blood Of Chaos. Please keep in mind it is unfinished and half of it is not yet edited... I am a terrable speller.

The Wanderers: Overall Outlines

Groups
Genocide: A semi religious cult composed mostly of full fledged demons, although despite the total number of members is in the hundred thousands, recent disturbances within the Genocide has caused the cult to dwindle in numbers. Very few members of the Genocide are equipped for combat, although they are willing to die needlessly to achieve an end for their means. All but the scarce high ranking officers of the Genocide (Sylvanias, Tarren and Kain to name a few) have a free will and as such are nothing but mindless drones following the master plan of whoever sets it out. The objectives of the Genocide lays within a prophesy which gives way to the method of how to wipe out heaven, hell, and earth fusing the trio of human existence into one dimension for demon kind to rule over. However, The Genocide needs their Demon Lord to achieve this goal, and for ten thousand years they have been working hard on unsealing their fading monarch: Lord Midus. In the past, shortly after the Demon Lord was born, he quickly went to work converting a large group of bandits into his mindless demons. But seven of the bandits had strong wills that not even Midus could break. Although not quite clear why he became something other then a demon, the vampire names Eclipse lead the revolt against Lord Midus, Amassing an large army of vampires (all being his creation) Eclipse lead a valiant effort against Lord Midus, but eventually failed. With his army of vampires down, Eclipse summoned his remaining strength and sealed Lord Midus away. Knowing full well that his seal can and will eventually break, Eclipse hid; only emerging to delay the Genocides effort to break the seal. Soon the seal was broken, but the Demon Lord had already wasted away to a mere skeleton, this second highest ranking officer of the Genocide, the Banshee Princess, and the only necromancer of the Genocide, Sylvanias took it upon herself to channel supernatural energy back into the demon lord to resurrect the lifeblood of the dieing cult. Since its initial creation, the Genocide has expanded at an alarming rate, and has spread its chaos far and wide, aiming to create a world by demons for demons.

The Wanderers: (Eclipse. Passage 1:01-1:10)
“Shay… Your life is my birthright, and your birthright in return is to finish what we had started. Let me tell you about your past life Shay… You were a Wanderer- A notorious clan of bandits that ruled the desert under its night time sky. Along with your comrades you went from town to town pillaging, raping and burning. Thus the name- The Wanderers, your clan never stopped moving. And I should know for I was the leader. Among the Wanderers was a former friend-Siegfried. He wanted to wash his hands of our kinds of business so he set off to seek the council of anyone who could help him. Unfortunately Siegfried found a demon that promised time would heal him. That demon had used their meeting to plant a certain seed within him- for it needed human life to nurture itself into what it is today. Siegfried returned to us without saying a word, and after only a week the seed took his body. The creature within the seed had its own plans… Against his will Siegfried turned on us and attempted to slaughter our caravan. But it wasn’t a mindless slaughter. Once everyone was killed Siegfried transferred his blood to the dead- and infected them. They were reborn into demons and other creatures of terror. Sadly half of them lost their minds and followed Siegfried’s orders, the other half attempted to escape but the escapees were hunted down like dogs. I was the only one that had managed to flee that night. Because you never lost your mind to Siegfried, you fled with me Shay. That is how I know you, and that is why I have recruited you. You wouldn’t be here now if you had become one of Siegfried’s mindless demons. The little bit of human that was still in Siegfried began to fight back, and when his humanity finally came to the surface of his infected mind, he was terrified at what he had done and his mind went into rapture. The creature inside him recognized this as a major problem and he separated himself from Siegfried. Seeing potential in Siegfried the creature didn’t destroy him, instead the worm took his soul and imprisoned it within hell. This left Siegfried as an empty shell- or a puppet. With Siegfried in hand and a few dozen demons in the other hand the creature vanished. The slaughter continued soon after and the creature had amassed a large army of demons- which today is a cult called The Genocide. The creature that had separated from Siegfried had evolved into something much more lethal- As the slaughtering of innocent humans continued; the creature grew and became stronger with each death- ultimately becoming a Demon Lord. Surly the demon that had planted the seed in Siegfried in the first place foresaw this coming. Convinced he could take the world, the Demon Lord returned to the surface reigning under the name of Midas. But I was there, and I had recruited a large army of humans and gave them my powers. It was an epic battle and both sides were at a stalemate in the end. All of my newly created vampires had fallen and in a desperate struggle I was able to summon a seal around Midas. He wasn’t destroyed- but he was locked away… temporarily. The Genocide for centuries has been trying to break my seal- and at last… The time for war is drawing near. You, I and the other Wanderers I have resurrected must finish what we started so long ago because only we can help. Shay… Will you please come to war with us?”

Protagonists:
Name: Shay Burdel:
Theme Song: Bloodletting- Concrete Blonde
Names Meaning: A name attributed to a good friend of mine.
Description:
-Nickname: None
-Birthplace: London
-Date Of Birth: (1st reincarnation) Febuary 22, 1883
-Date Of Death: April 2, 1905
-Reason For Death: Murdered
-Material Status: In Love (With Eclipse)
-Species: Unknown (Vampire/Phantom hybrid)
-Age: 22
-Sex: Female
-Height: 5'6
-Quote: "I do not think of myself as a monster.
Rather- just a misfortunate creature that’s doing what
it has to in order to survive."
-Weapon: Duel Mechanical Elbow Mounted Scythes
-Weapon/s Name: Leviathan & Mantis
-Description: The newcomer to the group, Shay is an energetic and witty character with a dash of feminine tenderness, downright vicious in battle she’s always quick to react in dire situations with the up most amount of lethality. Leviathan and Mantis
were engineered to produce the maximum amount of carnage- enough to satisfy the bloodlust of an elegant yet skilful killer with a hidden passion for death. Being shut out from the world, she develops an array of psylogical problems and her emotional
state is very unstable. The one thing that keeps her going is the two people she can get close to: Eclipse and Rouge.

Note: Shay has borderline personality disorder.

Name: Eclipse (last name unknown):
Theme Song: One Wing Angle Reunion- Final Fantasy Advent Children (Orchestrated)
Names Meaning: Eclipse was a perfect name for this character: Dark overlapping light- or rather the contrast between the two.
Description:
-Nickname: Angel
-Birthplace: New Spain
-Date Of Birth: June 13, 1688
-Date Of Death: (has not yet died)
-Reason For Death: (Has not yet died)
-Material Status: Single- Has lost interest in love.
-Species: Purebred Vampire (The last of the original vampires.)
-Age: 33 (ageing has stopped)
-Sex: Male
-Height: 6'8
-Quote: "That surface that tells the heavens it hath
an end cannot persuade me I have any."
-Weapon: Zweihander Type
-Weapon/s Name: The Full Eclipse
-Description: Within his veins flows the only trace of true vamperic blood in the universe- which ties him to his cursed fate. Eclipse takes full responsibility of the creation of vampires/demons - and is doing everything in his power to exterminate them. Believing that nightmares and monsters do not belong in the world- eclipse has fully isolated both himself and the wanderers he has drafted, making sure "their kind" are kept hidden from the world. The people he has drafted were bound to his fate through the initial creation of the vampire. Eclipse may be the leading hero of the story but he views himself as an inhuman monster causing an obvious contrast of both light and dark. Eclipses goals are hopelessly high: Destroy the demon lord Midus (who is indestructible) who brought vampires into the world, Disband the cult: Genocide and lastly, exterminate all who are not human. When Eclipse is not working on his goals, he remains shrouded in darkness keeping a watchful eye on the world for signs of trouble.

Name: Rouge Pallas:
Theme Song: Incubus Succubus- Belladonna and Aconite (Gothic)
Names Meaning: Pallas meaning wisdom in Greek.
Description: The philosopher of the group, Rouge is contempt to sip her import wine and day dream up her own version of the meaning of life, often trying to help Shay sort out her mind, Rouge lives up to her last name Pallas. With wisdom that far surpasses anyone’s wildest day dream rouge adds some extra mysticism to the book, and will allow me to express some of my own personal ideas on paper. Rouge, capable of flight is often used to provide the Wanderers with aril support, as well as having her own separate sub-story regarding the underlying plot with Tarren. Rouge will be one of the three main characters in The Wanderers 2: Blood of Chaos.

Name: Shenlong Trahern:
Theme Song: Never Going To Stop Me- Rob Zombie (Industrial Metal)
Names Meaning: Shenlong I felt was an excellent name for a dog, and Trahern means strength of iron.
Description: Perhaps the most socially offensive character I could possibly conjure, Shenlong is vulgar every chance he gets, and does his best to grief Eclipse (Shenlong doesn’t follow Eclipses rules), Shay and Rouge. Shenlong doesn’t need any kind of weapon as of his pure strength is unmatched in almost any opponent. It should be noted that Shenlong is very quick to anger in any mild situation, and has complete control over his werewolf heritage- transforming at will, which is almost unheard of. Strangely enough, Shenlong has a deep friendship with Kaylap. Shenlong will have his own separate sub-story reguarding the main plot with the demon Tarren, he will also be one of the three main characters in the Wanderers 2: Blood Of Chaos. By then he will have reformed his ways slightly, and even adopt the blood child as his own. Shenlong will be one of the two members to survive the first novel.

Name: Kaylap Takahashi:
Theme Song: My Will- Dream (Japanese Pop)
Names Meaning: Kaylap is a name of my creation; Takahashi is just a random Japanese name I like.
Description: Once a normal human, Kaylap possessed demonic blood and was offered up as a sacrifice to Midus, although he was rescued by Rouge the ordeal left Kaylap altered when his demon heritage was awoken during the ritual. The awakeing left the half demon unable to interact with the normal world, and so he tends to live in his own world and understands nothing he does, or anything anyone says to him. Kaylap is unable to find his true calling in life, but when he does he takes his place in history as a horseman of the apocalypse.


Title: The Divine child:
Theme Song: Why Wont You Die (system of a down)
Name: Currently nameless, but she will most likely go by Alyssa with the alias of Viper.
Description: Alyssa will be known as the blood child. Her title will come from her unique power to draw vast amounts of energy from life fluids, assuming that she draws her power from pranic energy- much like a vampire. Alyssa starts off as a child who murders her mom and classmates but because of her innocences, she is unable to comprehend. Sensing something is wrong, she is rescued by Shenlong and when she matures 20 years later she will deeply regret her past. It should be noted that Alyssa is neither good or evil, and can be converted from either or as of she is a neutral faction and is torn between good and evil. Ultimately she will turn to Evil, but in doing so she will fulfill her purpose in life- and that is to utterly destroy the demon lord. A task that only divine intervention can achieve. Alyssa will be fluent with all manner of fortune telling, particularly Tarot cards which are said to be a direct link with the divinity itself. Alyssa will use and craft her own fire arms, her favourite one will be one of my invention The semi automatic sub machinegun: S 0.005-25. She will also have a rocket launcher and will level the Black Citadel with it.

Antagonists:
Name: Midus:
Theme Song: Requiem for a Dream-Clint Marshal and Kronos Quartet (Orchestrated)
Names Meaning: Actually pronounced Mah-Dus. Another name of my creation, Recycled from an older project.
Description:


Name: Sylvanias Asceline:
Theme Song: Slaughter House Jive- Mortal Kombat Deception. (digital/industrial metal)
Names Meaning: Sylvanias: “Of the forest”. Asceline: “Nobel, or highborn”.
Description:
-Nickname: The Banshee Princess
-Birthplace: Rouen France.
-Date of Birth: June 13, 1692
-Date Of Death: (has not yet died)
-Reason For Death: (Has not yet died)
-Material Status: Unknown
-Species: Necromancer/Banshee hybrid
-Age: 29 (ageing has stopped)
-Sex: Female
-Height: 7'0
-Quote: (Demonic) Qel’va Azh.
-Weapon: Reinforced Epee (Variation of the Rapier)
-Weapon/s Name: Sacrifice
-Description: The self proclaimed Banshee Princess, Sylvanias is the only confirmed and known Necromancer in the Genocide. Sylvanias is tall, graceful and beautiful making the elegant rapier her choice weapon. In battle she is almost untouchable as
of she has mastered the art of Iai, and can split herself into 3 and strike the enemy from all sides at once. She is also the second most high ranking officer in the Genocide as of she is responsible for brining the demon lord back to life, and is responsible for
feeding the lord life energy for him to return to his former power. Rumour has it that Sylvanias holds the Bloodlust Oracle, and is in charge of several experiments that will help aid the demons in their fight against The Wanderers. Having no major physical weaknesses, Sylvanias downfall will most likely be from her sheer arrogance with a dash of her self absorbed personality.

Name: Kain and Abel Adok:
Theme Song: Das Ich- Kain and Abel (German/Gothic)
Names Meaning: Abel: Kain: “Biblical name meaning breath or sigh”. Kain: “Son of a warrior”. Adok: “Dark”
Description:

Name: Tarren:
Theme Song: Super Beast- Rob Zombie (Industrial Metal)
Names Meaning: My own creation, constructed from the word Terror.
Description:


Name: Siegfried Baldwin:
Theme Song: Raise Thy Sword- Soul Calibur 2 (Orchestrated)
Names meaning: Siegfried is a fan reference to Soul Calibur.
Description: Eclipses former friend is still a Demon lord puppet. Siegfried will be the guard of the Other Worldly Gate. He is merly a puppet and has no purpose other then to guard the passage.


Future Additions:
Based on Yura: Yura means: “of the hair”. She will dismember people for their hair, and work her powers on it to make the hair capable of severing flesh easily. From there, much like how a puppet can be controlled with string, she will weave deadly cobwebs of hair across the landscape for innocent people to trip into and end up in several pieces.
Based on Sesshomaru: Sesshomaru means masculine cruelty, He will be a very cold hearted villan.
Based on Naraku: This demon has been hiding behind the scenes manipulating others and pullings strings to get them to do his bidding.
Drakon: A Noble who is one with the battle field.
Dalkin: Drakon’s royal blooded son.
Talon: A very intelligent super beign. Deadly, and unpredictable.
Note: The sequel is set to contain as many unique demons as I can possibly think of. Not just the ones listed above.

Places:
Hells Avatar:


The Ashen Cathedral: Situated about 2,500 meters from sea level, far above Hells Avatar, and the highest point of the Dark Citadel, this Cathedral is more of a coliseum that’s so massive that the interior of the cathedral makes the Demon Lord appear to be the size of an ant against is colossal backdrop. The only notable architecture of the Cathedral is that one side of the structure holds up the roof with pillars, while the other side is a solid wall, making a fall from the Cathedral would be fatal to mostly any being. The final battle between Eclipse and Midus will take place here.

The Dark Citadel:
A massive bastion of evil, the Dark Citadel is the center piece in the endless strech of Hells Avatar. This is the place where the Demon Lord resides. The citadel is 2,500 meters tall and the highest point of the Citadel is the cathedral. The second most highest point is the channelling tower where Midus draws his vast power from both the Avatar and the living world.

Mistmantel Woods: After the Demon Lord was sealed away, his demonic powers seeped into the landscape around him. Soon the cursed forest grew and continues to slowly spread like poison. Rumours of hundreds of murders surround Mistmantel, and to anyone with a knack for smelling blood- well the scent of it here is disgustingly thick, even for a vampire. Once every hundred years or so, the Genocide returns to a clearing where their master lays to offer a small tribute towards his eventual comeback.

The Wanderers Den:

Genocide Labyrinth:


Eclipses Grave:


New York City:


The Slaughter House:


Otherworldly Gate:


Circle of the Apocalypse:


Breeding Tunnels:


Misc.
The Bloodlust Oracle:


Demonic Dictionary (Thus far):
- Sai’amd Yuund.
- Quel’va Azh.
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Notes: Yet anoter warcraft refrence, the launage is loosly based off of the night elf launage. There are many rules to it

Fighting Styles:
-Iai: Sylvanias utilizes this particular sword play flawlessly. The objective of Iai is to finish off the opponent in a single deadly strike, although simple in concept any move preformed in Iai has 4 stages, and between attacks the blade is sheathed. In other words, Iai is the art of drawing a sword.
-Fencing: An odd thing to combine with Iai, Sylvanias uses a reinforced Epee to accommodate the superior defence of Iai. With the grace of the Rapier, along with the deadly technique of Iai, Sylvanias has perhaps the most impressive fighting style in the entire story.

Insignias: The genocide uses a spiky G for their cult Insignia, while the wanderers use a bat encased inside an oval for their insignia. It should be noted that out of irony many of the Wanderers weapons have “Amen” printed on their arms, while the genocide’s ceremonial robes are often printed with a mess of undecriphal text which seems several times more complicated then any current known launage.

Character Interaction:

Character Psychology Analysis:

Concept Art:
-The Hive
-Genocide Sample Text
-Shay
-Eclipse
-Tarren (4 versions)
-Sylvanias (2 versions)
-Demon and Death Scythe
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How The Wanderers Will End:

How The Wanderers 2 Will End:

What Happens To The Characters:

Rouges Sub story:

Kaylaps Sub Story:

Shenlongs Sub story:

Project Overview:
-Prologue: Perfect Murder: 100-1500 words (finished)
-Chapter 1: Dancing With Demons (finished)
-Chapter 2: The Wanderers: 2500-3000 words
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- Chapter 5: Slaughter House Jive: 3000 words.
- Chapter 6: The Bloodlust Oracle
- Fallen Angles
- Escape from the Bastion
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- Gatekeeper
- March of the Damned pt 1
- March of the Damned pt 2
- March of the damned pt 3
-The Full Eclipse: 30,000 words
-Fallen Angle: 500 words
-Epilouge: The Darkend Tomb: 500 words (finished)
Half Demons (and their genetic relation to full demons):

The physical appearance of a demon:

The effects of demonic possession:

Why Eclipses Blood doesn’t make other vampires:

Demonican Dictionary: (These are the phrases that appear in my novel in the first chapter. The ones with the question marks are phrases im re-translating as of the origonal document dissapeared off my computer)

-Sai’amd Yuund
Sacrifice and blood
-Qel’va Azh
Rise from ash
-Quel’duel falas
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-Sai’Naga
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-Oni’Ys’En Ee shara’va’Ike derus‘Uha Falas! Oni’Ys’ Fel’Midus vi komarni one kai endo’En!
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I'd like to hear some feed back. E-Mail: meleemasterca@yahoo.ca.

My writting tends to generate alot of traffic- I'll try and get back to you ASAP.
 
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