No Ordinary Love(Feed Back)

[JAYCE73]

Hey all! I wanted to take the time and finally THANK YOU! Really from the bottom of my heart for all the wonderful feedback I've recieved from the readers.

For those of you who've never read my series, which won't end any time soon, I have a huge crush on a Porn star by the name of Tera Patrick. A lot of feed back, ask the question if she really exist. well a fantasy, would not be a fantasy unles you fantasize about some one or something real. So yes, Tera Patrick is real.( TeraPatrick.com) check out her site and you will see why I write this story about her.
A few months ago, I wanted some advise from some experts about these feelings I have for a woman I've never met. So I e-mailed Playboy.com and they responded by telling me to keep my expectations realistic, and to write her a fan letter. I thought that was so generic, so that's when I started writing my heart out. Tapping into feelings that I never knew I had. I've always wanted to write, I just never knew my first story would be pornographic.Any way, I recieved feed back from the famous "Anonomous" saying that the stories were not bad. Well this particular message had a "ring" of Professionalism to it. Like some one who writes for a living, and it stated in the message, something that was in my e-mail to Playboy and Tera Patrick.
So, I reached her. I got her attention, like I wanted.
So now, I just have to keep writing, and see what happens next.
So, if you want some one, never give up. Even though I'm not with her, I am about One thousand steps or so closer, which is better than I was before.
My stories are "No Ordinary Love" 1-10 ( catigory- celebrities)
Thanks again to all who read my stories, I love Ya!- Jayce73

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=59242 CHPT 1
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=59723 2 CHPT 2
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=59844 CHPT 3
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=60249 CHPT 4
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=62387 CHPT 5
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=63070 CHPT 6
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=63079 CHPT 7
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=64834 CHPT 8
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=64969 CHPT 9
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=66054 CHPT 10

 

[sirhugs]

if you want serious feedback here, please post a link.Its easy. Open a copy of your browser. Go to your story. Highlight the url. Copy it ( in Explorer, click Edit>copy). Return here. Open a reply. Paste the url in. Tada!

 

[the_bragis]

So, I reached her. I got her attention, like I wanted.
So now, I just have to keep writing, and see what happens next.

So, if you want some one, never give up. Even though I'm not with her, I am about One thousand steps or so closer, which is better than I was before.

That's it - I've made up my mind! Every single story I write from now is is going to be about my crush on that gorgeous, hunky and handsome Ben Aflick.

I wish you well with your future writing.

Have a great day now,

Alex(fem).

 

[EnglishWimp]

Jayce73, in chapter one you write
Physically, of course she is what every man fantasizes about, a nice tan complexion , a knock out body, long beautiful hair, well taken cared of hands

Are you serious?
I'm afraid I stopped reading at this point. (Well, actually I skimmed further to check if this was not some subtle joke)

Your post makes you seem obsessive and it reminds me of stalkers. I find it slightly scary.

 

[JAYCE73]

Yeah

It kind of scared me too, and I'm writing it.
The other week, I saw a Show on Vh1, about Celeb stalkers, and I was really scared into beleiving, that I feel into that catigory. Then I looked at her website, and read some of the post that her fans post, and TRUST ME I am NORMAL.
The story is strickly fantasy, and only FANTASY. Every one on this Goddamn site, if taken seriously, would eighter be in a mental instituion for sexual deviants, or arrested for incest, rape, tourture, murder, and whole slew of other soscially non acceptable behavior.
Look at the Incest site, hell Sex with my own flesh and blood, THAT'S FUCKING SCARY!
So who ever you are who posted this response, I just have one thing to say about my story, IT'S A FUCKING FANTASY!
I don't post crap about how I want to marry her, or that I'm going to rape her.
GET A LIFE!

 

[kristydoll]

yikes!