Newly published writer, newly discovered desires

[athena_by_night]

Hello to All~

I just wanted to say that this is the first time I have ever had anything published, well my first attempt to really. (and now two stories are available here!) A friend encouraged me and he has proven to be invaluable. Anything that anyone can share with me about constructively editing my stories or adding some depth to them I would welcome with open arms.

This is so exciting! I am exploring and expanding my boundaries, body and soul. Please nourish me with feedback. And if you are the one I acknowledge as my muse.. you know where to find me...

Athena by Night

 

[minsue]

You'll likely get more feedback if you include a link.

 

[athena_by_night]

newly published writer, newly discovered desires

Hopefully I added a link. I am so computer illiterate! Who knows.. thank you for the advice Minsue.

Athena

 

[minsue]

Three now, I see! Congrats

Here's a link.

I've got it bookmarked & will give them a read.

 

[windstormy]

Ooh, my passion...

And it is, at that. I love vampire stories. I think the vampire is such an erotic creature. To me there is such a sensuality about being forced to render to his feeding, or even to submit to it, much like a master/slave situation...lol... But of course, that's just my opinion. And I think you should, or at least hope you will, continue the saga of Stephano and his new mate.

 

[athena_by_night]

newly published writer, newly discovered desires

Thank you Billy! Naturally I loved your feedback. Chapter 2 is pending and I think I am going to go for Chapter 3. Keep up your own good work! And thank you Minsue as well for your help!

Marie

 

[dis_pac]

Dialogue from "It's All up in the Air"

I just finished reading "It's All up in the Air" and thought the dialogue was excellent. It helped build the characters and make them believable. It is often difficult to write a character that is better spoken than the narrator, but you nailed it, and not just by using big words. Keep up the dialogue, it's an extremely important tool for character developement in a short story.

 

[athena_by_night]

Thank you Dis Pac! Your comments were much appreciated!