newbie with first story posted

[litjeannius]

Hi all! I've been working on a story idea as a novel...a rather different/scifi twist on the vampire mythology...but have been a bit uncomfortable writing the more graphic aspects...so I did a stand alone in a similar 'universe', and it went up this morning. Feedback appreciated.. http://www.literotica.com/s/saved-from-herself

I'm keeping this separate from the 'universe' I'm building for the novel, but part of the universe is the same...their abilities, the fact that only some people are genetically compatible with the virus, and that basically, the 'vampires' aren't really bad guys...

My thought is to make two versions of the final novel...one more graphic and one a bit more 'edited for tv' if you get my drift.

 

[SamScribble]

Sci-fi of the vampire variety isn't my thing. But welcome to the AH. And good luck with your story.

 

[litjeannius]

my posted story doesn't have the scifi aspect in it..I'm saving that for the novel, but thanks.

 

[Sammael Bard]

Why sweat over posting same stories in a different way?

Violence isn't an issue unless it is over the top. A simple author's note at the top works well enough.

But, you are free to experiment with your story as you wish and no one is going to sue you for posting varieties of the same story.

You should go ahead with it if you think it's for the best.

 

[litjeannius]

violence isn't the issue. I didn't feel that comfortable writing the more erotic scenes when I first started writing the novel.... I've added some, but often without much detail. In the stand alone I posted, I took it a bit farther to see how it would be received... The novel, as it is now, is more story with some erotic aspects, but I am considering doing more...I just wasn't sure how successful I would be at it.