Newbie looking for a little help

[Leabharlannai]

So, this is my first time posting here, and I was looking for someone to give me a little feedback on a story. It's not nearly finished, but I was hoping to get some input before I got too far in and had to scrap everything.
It's my first attempt at writing erotica of any sort, but after reading so many stories I was inspired.
The tags for the story are definitely going to be Anal sex and mind control, though I'm tempted to add a bit of non-con/reluctance in at a later point, depending on how things go. I'm certainly open to anyone who has advice, and if all goes well it should end up being a pretty lengthy series.
Thanks in advance, and feel free to PM me with input.

 

[Kevin_mystery187]

I'll give it a read!

I'd be happy to give it a read! I assume you'll pm it to me? I've read several mind control stories so it's something I'm into

 

[DrTBanghard]

If be happy to if you'd like?

Mind control genre is something I scour this site for and definitely one of my favourites. I've written a few myself but have never worked up the courage to post anything for fear of a universal panning. A sneak peek at a new story with a chance to input is a treat I won't pass up!

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

If you need another reader feel free to PM what you have to me. I will give you an honest opinion of what I like and what I do not if hat is what you want.

No matter what you decide good luck with your story.

Mike

 

[beez1717]

You can always use the volunteer editor program. I just posted my first story on here and it is still pending, but the program was very helpful!

 

[CalMor]

I'd love to read your story. I'm new, too, and I think our subject interests mesh. I haven't tried to post yet but maybe I can send you a story in return one of these days. I can hardly wait to see it!
Cal