Newbie author looking for an editor

[luvmymilf]

Hello Everyone,

I'm looking for an editor to proof my recently finished story. It's just over 3500 words long, and would fit well within the Exhibitionist/Voyeur or possibly the Loving Wives category. The basic premise is of my wife exposing herself in public which leads to an outdoor threesome with a stranger.

I'm looking for help with dialogue as well as the flow of the story. Of course, grammar and spelling are important, so feel free to break out your red pen and point out any necessary corrections.

I think it's ready to post, but I've not submitted anything here on Literotica before and could probably use the help.

Thank you in advance - luvmymilf

 

[CWatson]

Free advice, worth what you paid for it: don't publish in Loving Wives.

I'm not saying this because I think your story doesn't fit into that category. Honestly, I don't know what fits in LW--only that I've heard enough about it from people here on the boards that I will never touch it with ten foot-poles. So far as I can tell, nobody knows what fits in LW... and that's the whole problem. The readership there divides into two camps: people who want stories about wives doing threesomes (or more), and people who want stories about wives doing kinky stuff with their husbands and nobody else. And they have been waging a voting war over the category for a while now, with the end result that any story posted there automatically gets a 0-star rating and a lot of very cruel feedback, regardless of things like plot, story, characters or actual quality. If Shakespeare posted there, he'd get that. If a monkey with a typewriter posted there, he'd also get that. The difference is that the monkey doesn't know how to read, so his feelings wouldn't be hurt by all the feedback. Between him and Shakespeare, he's better off.

In the meanwhile, I wouldn't mind editing your story. Send me a Private Message if you want, and we'll work out the details.

 

[luvmymilf]

Thank you for the reply. I've sent you a PM.

luvmymilf