Newbie author here

[ImmortaleAmante]

Well hello to you all, i don't know why it has taken me so long to come here but finally have and decided to introduce myself.

I have writen 3 short stories and i have enjoyed writing them but i am looking for more imput about them. Would love to hear what you think and of course i will return the favour.

All comments welcome, as i would really like to write more but always looking for ways to improve (its the perfectionist in me ).

Thank you Amante.

 

[LorriLove]

hiya love

hiya immortale nice to see you here, i must have a read of your stories later, nice one hun.

 

[pop_54]

Hello love

Hello Immortale love, welcome to the mad house, pull up a chair and sit a while.

Take care here love, there are some very strange characters and for God's sake don't ask, not ever, how long stories take to get posted normally, hehe!!

Oh and how are you on the subject of Garderobes and sheep, it crops up from time to time here

On the subject of strange characters, hello lorri you old tart how are you

pops..........

 

[ImmortaleAmante]

Hi Lorri and Pops Thanks for dropping in and helping me relax lol

And don't worry i would never ask how long it takes for a story to get posted but that doesn't mean i don't check anxiously lol

speak to you both soon.

 

[pop_54]

Hehe!!

Hi Lorri and Pops Thanks for dropping in and helping me relax lol

And don't worry i would never ask how long it takes for a story to get posted but that doesn't mean i don't check anxiously lol

speak to you both soon.

3 to 5 days, but don't for Christ's sake tell anyone I told you that wink.

 

[LorriLove]

Re: Hello love

Oh and how are you on the subject of Garderobes and sheep, it crops up from time to time here

On the subject of strange characters, hello lorri you old tart how are you

pops..........

f**k ewe

 

[ImmortaleAmante]

Re: Hehe!!

3 to 5 days, but don't for Christ's sake tell anyone I told you that wink.

Don't worry i won't Pops, i have had 3 approved and almost have the fourth ready to submit but still i worry with each new submission as much as i did with the first lol

 

[MathGirl]

Re: Hehe!!

Originally posted by pop_54 3 to 5 days,

Dear Pop,
I see you also have trouble with giving that answer at the appropriate time. lol
MG

 

[Guest]

Hola! Amante. I misread your AV sig as 'wanking' instead of 'wanting'. Gave me a giggle.

I'll read you soon and let you know via feedback. Welcome too.


Pops and Lorri: I enjoy your 'conversations'.

Perdita

 

[ImmortaleAmante]

Hola! Amante. I misread your AV sig as 'wanking' instead of 'wanting'. Gave me a giggle.

I'll read you soon and let you know via feedback. Welcome too.


Pops and Lorri: I enjoy your 'conversations'.

Perdita

Thanks Perdita i have been reading some of your poems tonight and enjoying what i have read so far, nice to meet you

 

[Guest]

Wow, thank you Amante. Poetry seems too oft' ignored.

anon, Perdita

 

[pop_54]

Re: Re: Hehe!!

Don't worry i won't Pops, i have had 3 approved and almost have the fourth ready to submit but still i worry with each new submission as much as i did with the first lol

I've got about 8 tales up altogether, and yes so do I, hehe!! every one, waiting to see if Laurel didn't like something and rejected it with baited breath.

See ya later love take care.

pops.............

 

[pop_54]

Re: Re: Hehe!!

Dear Pop,
I see you also have trouble with giving that answer at the appropriate time. lol
MG

Oh shit, she spotted it, now I'm in trouble

Hi MG darling how are you, whistling nonchalantly.

 

[ImmortaleAmante]

Wow, thank you Amante. Poetry seems too oft' ignored.

anon, Perdita

I love poetry but i just can't seem to write any, so i am sticking to stories for the moment.

Amante

 

[ffreak]

Welcome Immortale to the fare at our large and friendly table. Based on your AV we should be able to expect some wickedly interesting loving, yes?

I like horror, vampires and all.

-FF (gotta go read for awhile)

 

[ImmortaleAmante]

Welcome Immortale to the fare at our large and friendly table. Based on your AV we should be able to expect some wickedly interesting loving, yes?

I like horror, vampires and all.

-FF (gotta go read for awhile)

thanks for the welcome FF, yes i do love horror and vamps but haven't submitted anything in that line yet, though almost have a vamp piece ready for submission but it is not horror, but with more submissions and confidence my work will definately become more interesting <ewg> i hope.

 

[Jenny _S]

Welcome to the AH ImmortaleAmante,

Word of caution. Don't believe anything you hear in this forum. And don't be afraid of pop (he's the red one by the way). His mascot on the other hand....

 

[Wicked-N-Erotic]

Hello and Welcome ImmortaleAmante

I will pull up your bio and have a look at your work as soon as I get a chance, looking like monday right now. Your name is interesting, I like it.


Wicked

 

[Just_John1]

Welcome to the AH

I hope you enjoy your stay. You'll find some very bright, very creative people here.

I read "Office Fun" and gave you a pretty indepth humble opinion and critique as a pm. Look forward to reading more of your work.

JJ1

Edited to remove the examples of my stupidity...

 

[raphy]

Howdy hi =)

 

[Icingsugar]

Re: Welcome to the AH

I hope you enjoy your stay. You'll find some very bright, very creative people here.

...and then there's moi.
Welcome to the hang, Immortale.

 

[ImmortaleAmante]

Thankyou to all of you who have welcomed me, i am certainly finding lots of interesting people here and i am looking forward to getting to know all of you and your works alot better

 

[Guest]

thanks for the welcome FF, yes i do love horror and vamps but haven't submitted anything in that line yet, though almost have a vamp piece ready for submission but it is not horror, but with more submissions and confidence my work will definately become more interesting <ewg> i hope.

Hi Amante, you seem like a person with many great qualities. Well, you're a fellow horror fan for starters, so that can't be bad.

I can't wait to read your vamp piece, even if it isn't that horrific. Keep at it and write a real shocker one day. I've also got a vamp story in the pipelines, which is horror. Lots of cruelty to a group of men in that one, but shhhh, I don't want to scare this lot.

Lou

 

[raphy]

Thankyou to all of you who have welcomed me, i am certainly finding lots of interesting people here and i am looking forward to getting to know all of you and your works alot better

One of these days I might actually get around to writing something for lit.

 

[MathGirl]

Woo woo woo

One of these days I might actually get around to writing something for lit.

Dear r,
Gosh, really? Why?
MG