Newb author looking for an editor for mom-son incest stories

[defiler]

Hello,
I've just started writing erotica. As of now, I've finished two mom-son incest stories. Since I'm just a newb at this and also because English is not my native language, I would highly appreciate anybody helping me out in reviewing my story before I submit it. Help in spelling, grammar, punctuation and plot (even though I would be a little reluctant to change the plot) would be deeply appreciated.
-Thank you very much in advance.

 

[CopperSkink]

How many words you have could be the difference between a "yes" and a "no" even though there are about two people with tents here that will look at incest.

 

[defiler]

How many words you have could be the difference between a "yes" and a "no" even though there are about two people with tents here that will look at incest.

You mean to say there are not many people who look into incest? Alright, one has 2602 words and the other 2220.

 

[_Lynn_]

How many words you have could be the difference between a "yes" and a "no" even though there are about two people with tents here that will look at incest.

How do you know what others will look at?

 

[PacoFear]

I'm more interested in the significance of these "tents" Copper refers to. Is he implying that the two incest readers he knows of spend a lot of time here and so they've set-up tents?

Hurry back, Copper, and expound upon thy wisdom.

-PF

P.S. Sorry defiler, although I do read some flavors of incest, mother-son isn't among them. Nor do I have a tent.

 

[_Lynn_]

I'm more interested in the significance of these "tents" Copper refers to. Is he implying that the two incest readers he knows of spend a lot of time here and so they've set-up tents?

Hurry back, Copper, and expound upon thy wisdom.

-PF

P.S. Sorry defiler, although I do read some flavors of incest, mother-son isn't among them. Nor do I have a tent.

Or reading incest tents their pants.

 

[PacoFear]

Or reading incest tents their pants.

Ahhh, you may have it there, ML. I dub thee the Copper-to-English translatoress. Or translatorix. Depending on your preference.

Alas, you can't "tent" your pants can you? A thin blouse perhaps but pants...

 

[_Lynn_]

Ahhh, you may have it there, ML. I dub thee the Copper-to-English translatoress. Or translatorix. Depending on your preference.

Alas, you can't "tent" your pants can you? A thin blouse perhaps but pants...

Ah, but I can tent pants. And that's the important part.

 

[PacoFear]

Touche.

 

[kinkybelle_bi]

Defiler,

It's been two weeks since I put in several hours editing your first story and I haven't heard back from you. Please let me know the effort wasn't wasted.

-Kinkybelle