New Writer

[jewlia]

Hi..i have just recently joined Literotica and i enjoy it very much. The stories and authors are great...I have submitted my first story and i look forward to any comments..*good or not so good*..*giggles*...The story is called The Vacation. i have also submitted 2 more but they are pending approval.... i would very much appreciate any pointers..thank-You..
*soft smile* jewlia..

 

[CAT~~]

I posted a link so others can read your story after they read your note. I tried to read your story but I'm afraid its not quite my cup of tea, but the part that I did read seemed well written and you have an eye for detail.
Good luck with your writing.
Cat~~




http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=13361

 

[jewlia]

thank-you

Thank-you Cat...for the link and the kind words.. : )
jewlia

 

[Wilson Hart]

Loved all three

Seem to have the same thread. Tender dominating over-seer of a man, woman seeking approval, yet surrenders in the interval. I will say that the attention to detail and the sex was very well done!! Felt like I was licking and spanking!! Good Job. W. H. (same as you, three new stories, so, write and I'll read)