new writer would like some opinions

[zenithoclock]

I'm a new member of Literotica and would like some opinions about my first story. If anyone is interested it is about my personal experiences as a slave and how they have changed me. I really like this site so far and am looking forward to writing many more stories. Here is a link to my story, thanks!http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=67159

 

[WickedEve]

Hi zenithoclock
I read your story yesterday. I thought you touched on a lot of interesting things. What you wrote would make a great introduction for a series of stories about your life as a slave.
You briefly mentioned some experiences. I'd like to read more. Perhaps you could choose one experience and elaborate on it. I'd love more details.

 

[*ladylove*]

I read your story and sent you feedback. And congratulations on posting your story, it was a good insight. Especially for those of us that are foreign to such things. Any suggestions i had i sent in my feedback, so i just want to say good luck and keep writing. I'll look for more of your postings!!